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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Rip’ed 2:30 o’dark chance meetings determined clouding when east meets west with northern cold and southern warmth kaleidoscoped sounds deafening through layers of dream jagged streams of electric waking where did my dream go, the one that brought you here, now that my warm has been disrupted a cry of want is silenced in my stumble and bumble to disentangle, to peer with precise profundity at nature in its entire for this is when all is small and insignificant this is the moment my child comes forth in delight while Rip talks to me again, my own Wolf standing beside me in silent watch, he chants of ninepins by strange men playing, thus is my impression of a sundered morn of thunder and Rip and how much deeper all stories go |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Decaflame It's a good thing you held my hand wandering through this dream. LOL |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Decca darling girl this is utterly utterly wonderful I love it, one of your best I think. So beautifully free, so full of light and image. It’s utterly utterly divine and I love it. Oh what joy has caressed my eye this day, left on this page I’m spellbound by such awesome writing. When you write a dream you write like a dream, perfect writing This is utterly utterly fabulous writing. The flow of this as always outstanding. I utterly utterly love it   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Deca Deep indeed!! Loved the surreal swirl of this. Haven't seen you for awhile and miss your wonderful poetry! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms deca a storm, bowling and old Rip Torn movies? they say if you mix your meds that will happen? in my dreams it is just harley's and bad girls in gold chains and high heel shoes so I sleep as often as I can....even when riding .. cool stuff |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Sy, so kind of you to place your hand in mine, thank you for the eyesight... Mushy, you are over-exuberant but we all love it, thank you... Martie, sometimes my muse plays with me, sometimes it plays with others  thank you!...DS - you need to study your childhood stories, certainly this has nothing Torn about it, unless it left you itching at a scratch you can't reach...LOL...thanks for the read... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
old Rip Van Winkle were you there when he awoke or were you napping Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Deca, I have missed reading you. And this IS...it just IS!! I know you understand...  ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
ROFL@rip torn!!! the following is one of the clearest, most poetic lines i've seen quote:not only does it follow the concept, but fits so much imagery and emotion into a few words. i like this a lot! Chris |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I can hear the thunder of the bowling... Nine Pins....such a game... Said but not said, in such a poetic fashion by a master... |
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EternitysHorizon Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 145Twilight's Orchestra |
If we could only see below what the iceberg life holds in floating reach within to see without perspective forever growing a dream to be knowing Where rainbow touches earth |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I never realized how mystical bowling could be. STRIKE!  SPARE!Enjoyed... She said burn ... together. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
So what happened to the tenth pin? You STRIKE a lot of good interesting feelings with this piece...you have talent to SPARE! (now excuse me while i SPLIT) |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh my gosh, I've missed you and your wonderful words so so much, I hope all is well with you, this is a STRIKE-ing poem! (kiss on cheek) Your words always light up these pages, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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