Open Poetry #20 |
Can't Hide The Light |
Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Can't hide The Light Someone told me The sun was overrated For he loves the cover Of the dark of night No matter how hideous He thinks his form No matter the pain That causes him to morn The fear he cast On passers by It's out of heart He chooses to hide He feels to much So clings to gloom Afraid of hurt If he were to be kind But the shadows of the night Can't hide the light That dwells within His mind Connie McDonald Copyright@2002 May 16, 2002 6:41 AM [This message has been edited by Zinsser (05-16-2002 02:15 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
BRAVO!!! Yes, there will always be His light shining among every shadow and its warmth to us all is inevitable! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I just know your friend will love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Connie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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lunatic Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 172 |
El Sol keeps me warm and glowing, just for lovers Let thy moon arise. William Blake |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Wow.... I loved yr take on that. You have a very poetic mind. Awesome. She said burn ... together. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I think this is a favorite of mine now... nicely done, Connie *s M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
If I don’t already know this person, He sounds like my kind of Guy. I’m sure I’ll put this in MY library Gloom |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Quite interesting write. Thanks for sharing it Jenn Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving? |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
I am so very pleased that this was enjoyed Thanks ~~ Connie ~~ |
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