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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-04-18 12:33 PM

I wonder why
when thought ahead
the unexpected comes instead.
I spent two days
away from home,
each moment lost in thought, alone.

I see you there,
in dreams this night.
You in black, in shadowed light.
Tall, streamlined,
on you I lean
to hear each word
to breathe your clean, refreshing feel
I get each time
I word my feelings into rhyme.

I wish for you
to always know
that you are loved and even though
I see you there in colors dark
You raise in me an inner spark
to light the way, produce the glow
in neon colors
"I Love You So."

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2002-04-18 12:52 PM

Wynter~
The soft glow of the title caught me ...
and then I found this -

'I word my feelings into rhyme.'

Now that is just a beautiful thought~
And you do it soooooooooo well~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-04-18 02:49 PM

"I wish for you
to always know
that you are loved and even though
I see you there in colors dark
You raise in me an inner spark
to light the way, produce the glow
in neon colors
"I Love You So.""

(smiles) WOW!!! Ooohhhhh...your wonderful words are embroidered with flourescent light enchantment here, sweet friend, may his love ever shine so bright to you always and fill you with true happiness! (kiss on chek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

3 posted 2002-05-16 01:57 PM

I love this.

Dawn

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

4 posted 2002-05-16 01:58 PM

I love the idea of someone being streamlined, and the idea of neon letters of love.

Very cool, Maureen. (no silliness t'day)

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2002-05-16 02:02 PM

Lucky man. Lucky woman. Lucky couple

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2002-05-16 02:42 PM

Thank you Marge, I forgot I wrote this *s.
Hugssss

Noah,
florescent  love..a nice touch *s

Dawn, thank you for enjoying *s

bsquirrel, well streamlined he is, at least  to me, and I am aglow in neon whenever he is near... thank you

Interloper, oh  luck doesn't have much to do with it...at least not in my mind. *s  Howdy stranger

hugs
M

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2002-05-16 03:06 PM

I like the flow of this M.

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