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bsquirrel
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0 posted 2002-05-16 01:46 PM



This one came from reading an article on how, in a rush to preserve history, available recordings of poetry readings from the '50s and '60s have recently been transferred to digital technology, because the original reels are in such disrepair and poorly archived. Many reels had to be baked in ovens to get them to play long enough to be transferred to the new format. Others have lost whole phrases and sections of words because some parts have decayed so badly. Here's my take. Roll it...


-Magnetic tape decay-
His words are celebrated bones.
Poetry of the looped brown plastic.
The reels are baked to be played.
His words are going frayed.

Sweater songs to moth cocoons.
His cadence has gone carrot crisp.
God is chewing through his voice.
Where his meter stresses out.

His heap of bones rattle through,
made anew by their lost fragments.
The words he wrote, now missing, wrong.
Revising death, he speaks a new song.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2002-05-16 02:28 PM


"God is chewing through his voice".. some choice phrasing here b...
enjoyed the way you savored the "lostness"
of poetry...making up new words today (heatstroke I think they call it)

M

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2 posted 2002-05-16 03:15 PM



This is distressing, and will there
ever be a medium of note that we
will never lose the art of another?
I think not, so treasure all that is
here before you now...and glory in
the sight...

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3 posted 2002-05-16 04:22 PM


Well written, well said...

*smiles*
~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

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4 posted 2002-05-16 04:23 PM


I liked the idea of this. . .

and, to answer Lady. . . the only way that these could ever be preserved is for us to pass them from vessel to vessel. . . with the vessels being our minds. . .

great work. . .

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5 posted 2002-05-16 05:02 PM


I'm glad y' all enjoyed, an' tha' it gotcha thinkin'. What I like about this is it's like the writer is STILL revisin', even after death. Who knows what th' final form will be. Thanks for likin' mah words.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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6 posted 2002-05-16 06:18 PM


interesting story, and way cool title.

Chris

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7 posted 2002-05-16 06:28 PM


bsquirrel~

I do so enjoy the way you present your thoughts....NICE....


Lauren~

I would rather have one breath of his hair,
one kiss of his mouth,
one touch of his hand
than an eternity without it.

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8 posted 2002-05-16 06:42 PM


Glad you both liked it. Or, if my reply were on disintegrating tape: ###d######oth###ked#it.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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9 posted 2002-05-16 06:54 PM


Thanx for bringing this to light.....Guess
that is one reason I back up my poetry onto
a CD....Now....if I could only remember
where I put the thing???

Just kidding...

And I agree with LIW and Sven on their
thoughts....we should treasure what we
have...for one day, we may not..

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10 posted 2002-05-16 07:11 PM


Exactly. It's all ephemeral. Thanks for the insights, Magnus.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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11 posted 2002-05-16 08:20 PM


Poetry of the looped brown plastic.
The reels are baked to be played.
His words are going frayed.

How sad, but how very creative...

Great job, Mr.Squirrel

~taped hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Martie
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12 posted 2002-05-16 08:23 PM


This is so interesting, so sad...so glad for the poetic speaker in you.  
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13 posted 2002-05-16 08:35 PM


Lyra, taped hugs b##k.

Martie, glad you enjoyed. I'm just glad they're doing something about it before it's too late ... this is close to too late, but not quite.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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14 posted 2002-05-16 09:12 PM


Mike darling boy, hi love oh my this is sooooooo clever you are as I’ve mentioned a couple of times a very very good writer. Rarely if ever do I get to read anything that is so totally complete, the way you’ve written this is awesome. The thoughts and the concept are outstandingly good. Do I love it of course I do, this is superb.

I must admit I think I’m too much a product of the disposable age I back my files up onto disc, and then tend to lose the disc. Oh well, the important stuff I keep. And this I’m putting into my library, you don’t mind me squirreling you away do you? I didn’t think you would but it’s always wise to check



Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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15 posted 2002-05-16 09:21 PM


Wow Mike, I really don't know what to say.
This is an utterly profound write...
and I think I just want to sit here
and ponder it for awhile.
Tis sad...when you stop
and really thing about it.
Good stuff here!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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16 posted 2002-05-16 11:11 PM


Mushy, y' can do anythin' you want with it. Glad you enjoyed.

Nancy, thanks for reading and enjoying. This is one of those rare ones that it takes me two days to write. I'm glad the effort was worth it for y'.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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