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Nebulous
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Nebulous Nebulous would be the term Or heavenly of the germ Filled with echoes of my mind Ecstasy of the blind The sweet of flowers nectar Odor of powers vector Spilled a waterfalls of awe Before my senses of adore. Then I bathed in the willing And shivered in the chilling. Bowed before the golden gleam Tantalized as if a dream. Kissed my lips as morning dew Rosy red in orange hew Stroked my skin as paper thin Sent my head into a spin. Down the throat of mental Braille Swallowed by desires whale. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Then I bathed in the willing And shivered in the chilling. Bowed before the golden gleam Tantalized as if a dream. Kissed my lips as morning dew Rosy red in orange hew Stroked my skin as paper thin Sent my head into a spin. Down the throat of mental Braille Swallowed by desires whale. ====================================== Down the throat of mental Braille heeey Stinkylove...that line is cooler than cool.. cooler than even I know!!  I could read ya till I went blind and still not get enough of your wisdom rhymes and couplets of waaay cool. Love the imagery in this piece as well. Nebulous is never a word we would use to describe you or your poetry!!    |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You make sheen of the sheer follow dream of all held dear words of braille suit you well as from this pen words now fail |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Good morning love, It's raining here I hope the sun is shining there. Your words have pierced my paper thin, I hope you know the state I'm in? Makig tea for two just for me and just for you. See you in the garden soon as soon as Randy wakes at noon. Winkiewinkie Stinky Sunshine, You are invited if you would like some tea. Thank you sweet. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling boy, this has got to be one of your best. You are inarguably one of the best writers on this site. You use your pen like a master craftsman, the precision of each word, the flow of meter and rhyme cannot be bettered. Your words always manage to drench me with wonder today they have carried me into that place of heart, where tears are simply echoes and love always flows in a stream of divinity. You manage to release the light so it covers me with it’s healing aura of giving. This is utterly utterly wonderful I love it utterly. Thank you darling boy   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha, Well I do my best. But there can only be one GOD. LOL Thank you sweet. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
the whale of desire. . . hmmmm. . . wonder what it would be like to be Jonah??? great work Sy. . . --------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sven, You may have come close and don't know it. LOL |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I kept looking for my favorite lines to highlight... but I kept including until I'd repeated your entire poem. *S* I like this very much, Seymour. *S* |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Good 'un, Sy  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Just sitting here smiling at all the images these lines bring to mind. I got to second that response about being Jonah Nice one Sy Hugs |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
A whale of a tale there Sy, and a beauty it was too, but then I expect that now you know |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Down the throat of mental Braille Swallowed by desires whale. Wow!!!!!!!!!You did this real good, Sy! Excellence personified. ~a whale of a hugLyra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suthern, A perfect reply, Interloper, Thank you. Ruth, Thank you and a big hug. Sharon, Thank you sweet your a dear. Lyra, And a splash of a tale back. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I know this super guy his name is sweet Sy his rhymes are always clever his words will be forever |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Seymour, this is truly a whale of a tale, sweet friend, you are always such a wonderful storyteller among us all! (big hugggssssss) This is a true keeper, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you kind Noah you are a friend. |
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