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Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2002-05-15 10:03 PM

(This is inspired by Joanna's "Jackpot" and, for you, my sweet love Joanna!

Far Side Of The Rainbow
By: Noah Eaton
5/15/02

I've long been immersed in the colors of one end of the rainbow
Tirelessly aiming to make an armistice with the dreamweaver
My clarity has been synonymous to the reflections of bent silver spoons
Paying reparations to a porcelain heart hurt by winter's zither

Now I swear I've found the golden pot
On the far side of the rainbow where your prism heart sings
I feel like the luckiest boy in the world, like an unselfish millionaire
Wanting to offer all my charity to your heart forever and hear the wedding bells ring

I feel Pygmalion has finally freed you from the stony state of my dreams
Now I feel you are truly lost in my loving arms
You are my Galatea that I swear I will always hold close to my heart
And sprinkle you with rosepetals of all your wildest sweet dreams

Up atop the venus girdle veranda
I'll show you the whole world on this surreal magic carpet ride
Every time you whisper you love me in my ears it is reincarnation
You are the treasure of all my life...

For I've found your heart on the far side of the rainbow
You are the happy Tigger in my hearts hundred-acre wood
Let me be everything you need, take me, I'm yours
Joanna, I love you, I dream of kissing your heart forever and ever...
My love...

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (05-15-2002 10:50 PM).]

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2002-05-15 10:09 PM

...Every time you whisper I love you in my ears it is reincarnation...
My favorite line...as love is the banquet of the soul. Wonderful. ThisDiamond

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-05-15 10:51 PM

Noah, this is so beautiful...
I'm sure Joanna will love reading this.
~Hugs sweetie~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

3 posted 2002-05-16 12:01 PM

Again, your tender heart shines through!

lovely writing, Noah...

~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

4 posted 2002-05-16 12:41 PM

I feel Pygmalion has finally freed you from the stony state of my dreams

Beautiful thoughts, beautifully expressed, Noah...

~ hugs from the heart

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2002-05-16 06:20 AM

noah, you are a love man
in a young man
your feelings are what poets dream of

well done friend

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2002-05-16 09:31 AM

You are both such special people... I hope you know how many of us are rooting for your happily-ever-after! *S*

This is beautiful, M'toe...

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2002-05-16 10:44 AM

enjoyed

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

8 posted 2002-05-17 12:02 PM

Paying reparations to a porcelain heart hurt by winter's zither
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Beautiful!
Noah, you are getting better with each work you pen

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

9 posted 2002-05-17 04:04 PM

Grinning for all it's worth here...ah, Noah, it seems you've truly found that pot and it's worth far more than gold could ever be. Best wishes in your relationship

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2002-05-17 04:37 PM

Written with passion Noah....James

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

11 posted 2002-05-17 10:08 PM

Noah darling boy this is absolutely stunning poetry, beautiful and smooth. It flows with wonder across the page, illuming and brightening the spirit. Truly outstanding writing. You are a fabulous writer, your use of language and form are divine. I love this utterly utterly love it. Perfect poetry of the heart and soul This positive sings in my soul excellent writing your pen is really magic

Love and warm stuff
As always
Slushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

12 posted 2002-05-17 10:43 PM

Sweet Noah, your words of love are always amazing.
Sandra

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

13 posted 2002-05-17 11:06 PM

Poetic sincerity at it's best, Noah.

elfin_tigress
Member

since 2002-05-15

Posts 101
Someplace

14 posted 2002-05-17 11:36 PM

I'm almost overwhelmed by this! Whoo!

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

15 posted 2002-05-18 10:26 AM

Noah, I am sure Joanna smiled when she read this one. Love is awesome aint it!!

Like a red brick,
in a white wall
somebodies brush
forgot to paint...
lonely....(as sung by Tracy Lawrence..)

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