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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2002-05-11 07:53 AM

Repost:

One goal one soul

The wind that touched your face today
And mine in gentle feel and play,
Embraced us since our very birth,
Forever with us on this earth.

Our breath has touched and joined with those.
In past and present since time arose.
And you and I have touched before
And will embrace forever more.

So do not ever feel left out
And do not ever harbor doubt,
That you and I are tied as one
And never will we be undone.

We all encircle time and space,
We live and die within this place.
We are together in one goal,
We are together as one soul.

The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace.

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-05-11 08:03 AM

As the cottonwoods sway in their sigh
I read these words, and time goes by
the winds shall call, I'll read again
of dragon's days, and milder men
I shall read of ever-winging butterflies
and of a poet, whose name is Sy

SmittenKitten
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since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

2 posted 2002-05-11 08:18 AM

Sy~ This is beautiful....so heart-warming. Who could ever feel alone after reading this? Lovely sweet poet.

And awww, what a lovely reply from Karilea!

*hugs*
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2002-05-11 09:10 AM

Our breath has touched and joined with those.
In past and present since time arose.
And you and I have touched before
And will embrace forever more.

So do not ever feel left out
And do not ever harbor doubt,
That you and I are tied as one
And never will we be undone.

We all encircle time and space,
We live and die within this place.
We are together in one goal,
We are together as one soul.

The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace.
===================================

This has been a long standing fave of mine since you first shared its gift of tender rhyme. I will never forget the first time I read this gem...the warmth it gave my heart, the smile it placed on my soul ...for this is soul poetry...
soul poetry at its finest.

loveya Sybabes ... heart and soul.
*winkiewinkie*

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-05-11 09:22 AM

The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Love this piece Sy...
especially love the closing couplet.
Such a nice warm feeling this piece evokes.
~Morning Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2002-05-11 10:26 AM

Sunshine,
Thank you sweet.

Krista,
Thank you. Squeeze:

JM,
And you know that the love is returned.

Randy Stinky.

Enchantress,
Thank you for the morning hug.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2002-05-11 11:50 AM

And so we all shall be....wrapped perfectly
together...

Your wisdom always shows so well within your
words...Thank You Sy...

Marsha

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since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

7 posted 2002-05-11 12:25 PM

Seymour darling heart what an utterly absolutely beautiful piece of writing this is darling boy it’s exquisite I can feel the soft feather of times memory brushing against your soul. You’ve written absolute perfection here, and I’m spell bound by your ability to write such beauty.

Time flows on with sweet delight and your soul will flow within it’s stream always illuming and brightening my soul. Utterly utterly wonderful writing

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2002-05-11 03:47 PM

Magnus,
Thank you and yes we ae.

Marsha,
You continue to delight me.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2002-05-11 04:53 PM

Fabulous writing Seymour...James

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

10 posted 2002-05-11 04:56 PM

This is so beautiful Sey....so beautiful.

Like a red brick,
in a white wall
somebodies brush
forgot to paint...
lonely....(as sung by Tracy Lawrence..)

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

11 posted 2002-05-11 07:01 PM

James,
Thank you for the fabulous.

Gentle Spirit
And thank you for the beautiful.

snowpants
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since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

12 posted 2002-05-11 07:31 PM

'So do not ever feel left out
And do not ever harbor doubt,
That you and I are tied as one
And never will we be undone.

We all encircle time and space,
We live and die within this place.
We are together in one goal,
We are together as one soul.

The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace.'

These are such beautiful rhymes combined with perfect cadence...excellent write!

sp

I've been down this road forever,
and the time has come to circle back home...

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

13 posted 2002-05-11 07:35 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, I know your gorgeous words will always touch her heart and this same breeze is bound to forever kiss your heart with love and laughter! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

andEmmamakes3
Member

since 2002-05-11

Posts 66
Kent

14 posted 2002-05-11 07:38 PM

Seymour Hi there it’s Emma here I’m the youngest of Mushy’s daughters. I’ve been trying to join for weeks but not been able too and now yes I can so I did. Mum will now have to wait her turn patiently. As I’ve had to do for weeks while Krissy has been having fun in the forum. I definitely don’t write poems.

I’ve read you for a long long time, before Krissy did, she is just a recent convert you can ignore her now I’m here. We are all competitive in our family, even though we love each other, we are still always competing

I love the thought of this it is I think one of your best, you have an intuitive and natural feeling for the flow of words I like this one a lot well written and well presented. Well done

lots of love
Emma

Eternity, stands laughing at old time
for ages? In the grand ancestral line
Of things eternal, mounting to divine

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

15 posted 2002-05-11 07:43 PM

Now you and I got to hug,
I even kissed you on your mug!
I'd do it again and you know why?
There's no other soul, like our Sy.

Lovely Sy, just lovely.

We should spend less time worrying about when our life is going to end and more on when it's going to start!

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

16 posted 2002-05-11 08:16 PM

The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace.

This is so beautifully written, Sy...and so true.
I think I feel this way about the rain, which is probably why I love it so much.

~breezy hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

my3monkeytoes
Member

since 2002-05-11

Posts 152
In the Carolina Breeze

17 posted 2002-05-11 09:20 PM

There is nothing like the lovely rythym you provided here...and the beauty of the words displayed. I'm glad you reposted this one! Such a meaningful phrasing!

~Sydney McLean

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

18 posted 2002-05-11 10:37 PM

Striking!
Read several times, and agreed with me all of them. Excellent. ThisDiamond

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

19 posted 2002-05-12 07:35 AM

Snowpants,
Thank you for the excellent.

Noah,
Thank you my riend.

andEmmamakes3
Well are there anymore home like you.
You have a very talented family.

Sharon,
Nothing like a kiss from you.

Lyra,
You are the most lovable chipmunk I've ever come across.

Sidney,
Thank you so much,

This Diamond,
Can't do better than excellent, thank you.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

20 posted 2002-05-16 05:05 AM

kinda reminds me of one I wrote about blowing a kiss across the sea, over the waves, and landing to bite the lips of my lover...

"Tonight as I was back again
I blew a kiss into that wind
figuring it was strong enough
to carry it to its end
across the many miles, above
treacherous currents of the sea
so if you felt the wind bite your lip
not to worry...it was only me."

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

21 posted 2002-05-16 08:16 AM

passing shadows,
Excellent, enjoyed the reply.

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

22 posted 2002-05-16 09:24 AM

So do not ever feel left out
And do not ever harbor doubt,
That you and I are tied as one
And never will we be undone.

What a beautiful reassurance! *S* I can easily imagine this being read as a couple renews their vows. *S* The writing is superb... the sentiment goes straight to my heart. *S*

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

23 posted 2002-05-16 10:48 AM

Suthern,
And so do you.

Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

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Deep in the heart

24 posted 2002-05-17 12:04 PM

one goal one soul
=====
A very worthwhile goal my friend.
I truly enjoyed this piece

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

25 posted 2002-05-17 12:36 PM

Interloper.
And I enjoyed your reply.

elfin_tigress
Member

since 2002-05-15

Posts 101
Someplace

26 posted 2002-05-18 09:38 AM

This poem took my breath away! It's definitely going on my list of favorites! It really shows the connection that two people can have, and how it can stretch further than the eye can see--a very connection of souls. Exquisite!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

27 posted 2002-05-18 10:22 AM

Elfin,
Thank you dear.

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