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Christopher

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

0 posted 2002-05-15 09:57 PM

Don't ask...

Spinning
©2002 C.G. Ward

a place like summer,
where snapshots of certitude
follow revelations
like the dawning of a new era
a place where it's habit
not to trust the taste
of victory, as it rounds
the edge from a fatal fall.

a place where...

wait -

if I were to tell you
that your smile
knocked my knees left
into a spinning descent
of wondering how the hell
you manage to steal me
every time
you walk through the door,

would you slip through it
again?

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2002-05-15 10:00 PM

Ah yes, the knees are the first to go!
I think I get this...
A wordsmith extrordinaire! ThisDiamond

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 2002-05-15 10:04 PM

Yes sir...it's like this.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

3 posted 2002-05-15 11:37 PM

Christopher~

LOL I am asking.....

YES...

thought provoking....very much so....

very nice Christopher....hugssss

Lauren~

I would rather have one breath of his hair,
one kiss of his mouth,
one touch of his hand
than an eternity without it.

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (05-16-2002 10:39 AM).]

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

4 posted 2002-05-16 12:00 PM

Very nice, C...

*smiles*

~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

5 posted 2002-05-16 04:40 PM

Hey hon...lots of longing noted in this one...but as always, a wonderful write. Take care dear friend

Christopher

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

6 posted 2002-05-16 06:41 PM

interesting ruth - maybe i'm just always longing!

tier - very appreciated *smile*

lauren - and again? and again? now twirl...

sharon - you too, back through the door. hugs cutie!

thisdiamond - wordsmith indeed. lol, thank you, but this was more an accidental collection of randoms than anything else. *grin*

Chris

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2002-05-16 08:38 PM

Chris, Now this made me smile...

In fact...I'm still smiling.

Enjoyed this, I did!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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