»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #20
»
dark wood dreams
| Open Poetry #20 |
|
dark wood dreams |
|
|
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
|
you were virgin in pale skin your fingers took you there by slick sided canoe and made you dance for the dark tree eyes you worshiped the black mushroom and pressed your breasts there til they seeped the musk of many before that were willing sacrifices but you said you would be remembered as the worthy one that bent the trunk of heavy tree strength and that you would wear the scar on your mind skin willingly just for a taste of pain that would make you cry in your secret place where your woman lives ©Dark |
||
| © Copyright 2002 ©Dark 2k - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
The symbolism and imagery leaves one gasping... and I should think it would leave you smiling. |
||
|
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
deca, a smile and a gasp go so well together. thank you ms |
||
Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggsssssss) Oh my gosh, this is wonderful, sweet friend, your words always take us through the heart of the briars and reveal passion in all detail wonderfully! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
||
|
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dark~ I found myself waiting to exhale as I anticipated your next word... to take me there. when you did....I smiled. ~Morning Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
||
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger Pretty strong stuff, enjoyed. |
||
|
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
noah, thank you amigo. enchantress, hmmmm thank you for the little sigh at the end.. sy, thank you sir...is really kind of innocent if you consider it from the prospective of yard work and spring gardens... |
||
|
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS A touch of mystic and old ways, mixed up with your sultry vision. Good Morning! |
||
Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
DS darling boy this is wonderful writing and I forgive you for this wonderful piece, this is an absolutely fabulous poem from you. I could feel the sigh within. Brilliantly written. Well done darling heart very well done The imagery in this is breathtaking you are an excellent writer As always Mushy   To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
||
|
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie, good morning babe, and thank you for the eye touch. marsha, thank you for the forgivness..and the sweet punishment of your touch... |
||
|
Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
her worth measured not by comparison to the willingness of others rather by the ache of forest's dark desire when her footsteps fall silent. Indigo |
||
|
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
indigo her worth never compared but worn as a gem round the neck of the sun thanks babe... |
||
|
Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh my....my...my !!! Chris  Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
||
|
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
chris, good mys'??? thank you lady |
||
|
devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This was a breathtaking trip DS... you are exceptional in this... *love the sultry sounds in all your work* Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
||
|
Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
With this, it might be possible that one may see the forest for the trees...that is, if one is allowed to look around...  |
||
|
Secret Whisper Member
since 2001-01-25
Posts 298Through the Looking Glass |
This may just be one of my favorite poems I have ever read. It creates wonderful visual and tactile imagery. Beautifully written, and so scandoulous. Bravo. "Why should I live? Why should I do anything? Is there in life any purpose which the inevitable death that awaits me does not undo and destroy?" -Tols |
||
|
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
devina, thank you sexy ms...I appreciate your touches lady Whyte, you may join me in my forest but your whyte gown might get soiled a bit it is dark and damp there..thank you lady secrets...thank you so much for the review, glad you enjoyed it |
||
|
bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I don't know why it took so long, but ah'm glad to've found this meadow clearing of yrs. She said burn ... together. |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
