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Near golden sunsets

0 posted 2002-05-15 04:07 AM



Pillowed by cold folds of clammy mud
and blanketed with icy rain drops
fallen from tempest laden skies,
She lay shivering along the roadside
waiting for her night to pass.

You can't wake a person who is pretending to be asleep. -- Navajo Proverb

© Copyright 2002 Philip Zemler - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2002-05-15 04:09 AM


heartbreaking
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2 posted 2002-05-15 04:11 AM


tsk..and ya just drove on BY? Didn't ya see my thumb out? okay <--that was my joke.

But a very apt portrayal of desperation and need. I should know. <---tch. I don't know when to quit sometimes.

Nice to see you here, Master P!

ethome
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3 posted 2002-05-15 06:02 AM


Deeply sad but oh so realistic for some!
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4 posted 2002-07-09 06:36 AM


I must have missed this one during all my absent time.

You do your images of thought and things so well, Luv. I hope you're doing better, or that you will be soon.

Luv ya..

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

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5 posted 2003-01-03 05:35 AM


God! this is sad!
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