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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-05-14 10:32 PM


(This is for you, my sweet love!)



My Woman of Grace (My Joanna)
By: Noah Eaton
5/14/02

You are the deja vu of every dream I dream
You are the angel that tucks the blankets over my heart as I sleep
Every day you are my motivation, my predestination
You are all my sweetest joys deep in my anatomy

Even when you're gone, I still love you just as much
I would give anything just to feel your loving touch
You are the eighth wonder of the world, you are my Nirvana
In your eyes I find remants of Atlantis and Eden

Everyday your pictures fill my mind when I'm at school or home
I sigh and let out a deep breath with a smile on my face
All the same I can't help but shed a tear
Never wanting to lose you and always hold you tightly in loves embrace

How I ever dream so much of meeting you in the future
Hugging you close and crying in joy when I feel your warm heart to mine
I want to be your refuge from all those who try and make you feel sad
I want to hold every laugh and kiss away every tear you cry

I dream of spending many balmy rainy days with you
Kissing your moist lips under one umbrella we share in the pouring rain
I want to take you to the beach every day you desire
And sip back on fruit juices, laying together on the sand from sunrise to sunset

I love you more than any girl in the whole wide world
You are the girl of my dreams that I want to make happy forever
I just want to feel the beating of your heart to mine
And kiss your warm neck and whisper honest vows of love to your ears

You are the girl I want to fall asleep beside
And stare into your gorgeous eyes before I fall asleep
Watching that starry smile glimmer to me
Your smile is what I want to see most of all all my life

You are the one I want to share all my favorite songs with
You are the one I want to dedicate every happy song I write too
You are my woman of grace
You are my love, my sweet Joanna...


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (05-14-2002 10:42 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-05-14 10:42 PM


Oh sweet Noah,
This is so beautiful...
I'm sure Joanna will love and treasure this.
~Big Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Suetang
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2 posted 2002-05-14 10:42 PM


Hello Noah

This is a stunning dedication to your sweet Joanna and I'm sure she will love it.

Take care.....Sue

Suetang

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3 posted 2002-05-14 10:46 PM


*sigh*

I so enjoy watching this bloom....a lovely write....hugssss


Lauren~

I would rather have one breath of his hair,
one kiss of his mouth,
one touch of his hand
than an eternity without it.

ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2002-05-14 11:02 PM


A beautiful tribute to the grace and romance of love. ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2002-05-14 11:18 PM


so beautiful dear noah.. ..i hope all your dreams come true...hugss

              ~Victoria


"If music be the food of love, play on."  (William Shakespeare)



HopeS
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6 posted 2002-05-15 02:24 AM


Noah , your sweet , tender loving heart
shines through and through
I do hope all your deams come true
Hope

Corinne
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7 posted 2002-05-15 02:34 AM


Noah,

I hope you'll always see life this way.

Corinne

ethome
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8 posted 2002-05-15 03:32 AM


Such a deeply passionate and warm piece of writing Noah! I have become accustomed to your wonderful open hearted expressions...very nicely done!
JamesMichael
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9 posted 2002-05-15 06:19 AM


The soft sincerity of this is incredible...I like the title...one of your best Noah...James
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