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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
The rain tapdances on my grave Dark and dreary is the night So sad and lonesome Not silent, just hollow The void calls to me It sings a lullabye To my poor spirit We are old friends And soulmates This void and I Both empty We're one Alone. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
That tapdance is a sorry shuffle, made even worse when you know the steps by heart. I would rather waltz anyday if the music would only play. I felt the missed beats in this. |
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DestinysCharm Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 90 |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Bonnie, this is so very sad, sweet friend, I hope everything is alright and this loneliness doesn't apoply to you now! (kiss on cheek) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bonnie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Brilliantly described. ThisDiamond |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Excellent writing. I enjoyed the read even though it was so very sad. alan |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
this void and I... I liked that very much an inspirational thought M |
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