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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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at sunup in the morning time you could see her run crazy feet hurry to the coupe side with mr pynk and her slick in skin wet sack off to pay the greenville goober that punished her with stories bout time and that he was the prince of wealth and his magic frog gave golden favors if she would just give a kiss there and say he was a pretty god but she had the glass eyes and didn's see said mr pynk was her only king and that she just wanted to be an alter in the dark wood woods where daddy and the den would all pray and cast the spell of slick spill cream and mr pynk would grant her magic wishes ©Dark |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
guess this is one I am not too sure I understand...making me think too hard this morning Mr. Dark..or maybe I am just too tired. *s M |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Walking the dark side, this one... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
oh no!! It's myster pink!! sorry DS, just my lack of being awake yet......coffee hasn't kicked in yet. Interesting stuff Ds.... Like a red brick, |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
nt..it will develop over time....from the other world where everything has life and evolves from dreams..thanks Sunshine ms...good morning...yes a bit dark, but had to make the reader think deep to get to this one...can't always be so open now can I? thanks lady GS, snapshots of lives...just the names are changed to protect the guilty thanks babe |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) I too found this to be darker than your usual style reading this, though I enjoyed this very much and can see how wonderful and meaningful this is, for every destiny and dream has its dark side of the moon and the mystries should never be taken for granted! (big hugggsssssss) This is powerful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
noah, thank you my friend...it is not that dark really...is mysterious and mischief laden but is just an image of the daily grind of going to work and dealing with homelife stuff...not anything bad |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
mr. pynk then granted her darkness in the dark dark wood-- faeries' tress a god in hood-- laughter tinkling knows I could  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Dark,... "and mr pynk would grant her magic wishes" Hummm, I have a few I would like granted. ~warm hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms serene, thanks lady....ya'll got them places in naworleans too? ms enchantress, am sure he would bless you with such granting..seems to be such a willing saint thanks lady [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (05-14-2002 09:32 AM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
well...y'might need a map! rofl |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
DS darling boy Oh my word, this is utterly gorgeous, HALT! Stop right there, is it legal to have poetry this spectacular and wonderful? I think I shall have to protest this is just too perfectly divine darling boy, absolutely wonderful. There’s only one way for you to escape sentencing form the poetry police, and that’s to agree to write all my poems too. Well, why not? It seems a very reasonable request to me No one would mind darling boy honestly. Well, I wouldn’t anyway. As you know this nonsense is meant to distract from the fact this is an utterly excellent poem and I love it love it love it. Pure poetry, Mr Pynk grants wishes? He should be an interesting and useful friend to have around. As always Mushy   To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger Thanks for placing me in the hall of mirrors. I'm still trying to find my way out. LOL |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
serenity, will close my eyes and you can guide me.. marsha, would love to write for you but then how would we get your lovely out there? thank you sweet lady Sy, sorry bud....had all them damn mirrors and needed to test them out...just follow the sound of the ice cream cone melting...to get out....thanks guy!!! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS Thanks for this drink from the dark dark woods pond. Wave hello across the heat waves and past the smoke. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie, thanks babe...waving back from the barely tepid coastal layer.. |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
I'm finding that I like all of these facets of your imagination. Draws me in to the dark and mysterious woods of your wordplay. There's the man I chose. There's my territory.....Shakira |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Love the idea of callin' someone a pretty god. She said burn ... together. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
phachi, thank you sweet syrup for trickling into my liquor BSQ, thanks amigo...many of our gods are sure pretty...those we worship |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Sooooo... just where do we find Mr. Pynk, Mr. Dark? Hiding out I'm sure! ab..so..lutely..love this!!! Sincerely, Reg |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
loved the insenuation of this... very much indeed... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Regina, he is just a regular guy hanging around waitin for some regal lady to take him home...heck sounds like me... thanks babe devina...there you go with that mind again.. no he is not a pink popsickle... thanks lady |
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