Open Poetry #20 |
the whole thing "love" |
newmanwalking69 Junior Member
since 2002-04-10
Posts 10 |
when everything goes wrong i wish everything would go right when i think things are right people tell me they are wrong when i find something wrong i want them to be right when everything is right i can relax in peace when everything is right for me it is read that i will be dead. when love is everything you know everything could be right love is a magicial power not an emotion like people say its magic everywhere its in tree, birds, and everything you see when my love is right i will be in heaven, when my love ends up wrong i'll probably be in hell. but for now my love for who is the who i love the most is all i need to survive and when i know my love gets stronger i'll know things are happy and calm. but now everything is uneasy and rocky. so when your in love always think your love can always get stronger. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, Newman...I think you're going to like it here! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting...and have a good time! Karilea |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
BRAVO!!! Yes, yes, may we always believe in love and let it grow stronger as we hold onto it, sweet friend, this is wonderful! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) This is a marvelous first post, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! Ooohhhh...and please check your e-mail for a very special greeting from all of us here at Passions for you! We all love you you so much, sweet friend, I can't wait to read more of your work! Youn have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Hello, welcome to Passions, you'll love it here I know! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
And when it is right...you will know! Welcome to Passions...enjoy! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
welcome to passions and well done on your love view..enjoyed this |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thanks for sharing..*s and welcome M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! You'll find lots of poetry here on love.. or the lack thereof... Come on in and enjoy yourself! Very well done first post! ~Hugs, Nancy Lee~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Hi Nick!!! I enjoyed your poem, I've always told you that you had talent, do you believe me now! I was telling the truth. Look around and have fun sweetie. joanna [This message has been edited by RosePetal (04-10-2002 08:17 PM).] |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
"your love can always get stronger" I love that line! Welcome to Passions, I think I'm going to like you! |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
I love an Optimist!!!! Welcome to passions!!! Love, Light and Peace Sherry Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Welcome! great first post looking forward to more from you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
newmanwalking69 Welcome, enjoyed. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Welcome to Passions. I look forward to more of your work |
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