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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-04-07 01:39 PM

A lone rider crosses the wilderness
In search of a vision from sleep
Along a path winding, so endless
in thoughts treasured and so deep.

A kiss in dreams, a touch not felt
A beauty in mind, of softest skin
In rest, beside her he had knelt
lightly touching, her heart within

The ride long, the perils to find
The heart strong, to hold and see
A moment of bliss, only in mind
Yearning, wanting, hoping to be.

Left to the wandering, endless trek
Shedding a tear, if only just one.
Wiping the eyes from sands speck
Wandering, beneath heat of sun.

Come from the vision to once see
the beauty so rare, so precious be
Let the heart of two souls ‘gain beat
entwined eternal, till once will meet

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2002-04-07 01:43 PM

Ah Magnus ... this just sings! Beautifully melodic and flowing, lovely sentiments indeed. Very much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-04-07 01:44 PM

(sigh) This is a powerful poem of a search of true love, sweet friend, may everyone always cross the deserts of yearning to find true paradise stand before their very eyes always! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thasnk you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2002-04-07 01:46 PM

Thanx Kit....I am trying to get myself back
on track...Muse problems... Glad you liked
this...

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

4 posted 2002-04-07 01:52 PM

Magnus darling boy oh my stars this is utterly utterly one of your best ever. This flows like liquid honey, sweet and as smooth as silk. Truly awesome writing, you never disappoint the reader darling boy, and this reader, in particular is always delighted by all you write. Even if it’s quality is immeasurably superior to my own I forgive you for being such a fine writer.

Muse problems darling boy, how could your muse dessert you? You’d never know darling boy not in a million years, this is excellent

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

[This message has been edited by Marsha (04-07-2002 01:53 PM).]

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2002-04-07 02:05 PM

This is bautiful, I love your style here.
Sandra

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2002-04-07 02:13 PM

A pleasure to read...James

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

7 posted 2002-04-07 02:16 PM

Magnus...BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!! So tender and soft. Almost like the touch of a gentle kiss upon the lips. ***Ivy Rose

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2002-04-07 03:04 PM

Come from the vision to once see
the beauty so rare, so precious be
Let the heart of two souls ‘gain beat
entwined eternal, till once will meet
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Wonderful Barry....*soft sighs heard coming out of Canada.* This is as gentle as a whisper and I love it!!
Hugs.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2002-04-07 05:12 PM

I heard of this before I read it, Enchantress does have a way of sighing so well...

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

10 posted 2002-04-07 05:25 PM

Barry~

If you are having a muse problem, well...(LOL) this is enchanting.....every line...

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows of my heart

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

11 posted 2002-04-07 05:37 PM

Barry - this is a good one indeed. Nice to read you again...

BC

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

12 posted 2002-04-07 08:46 PM

"Come from the vision to once see
the beauty so rare, so precious be
Let the heart of two souls ‘gain beat
entwined eternal, till once will meet"

Great poem Barry, truly enjoyed it. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

13 posted 2002-04-10 02:18 AM

*BUMP*

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

14 posted 2002-04-11 11:41 AM

This flows beautifully, Magnus... I enjoyed it very much. *S*

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