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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I knew you as ocean in the mornings when the sun moved closer to bring his new day you called me man of sky then we danced there at our edge place our mouths whispered to purple mountains we made kisses where we touched and the sun looked the other way we pulled clouds over our entwine like blankets of damp warm that hid our hands and how they made the love myst we erased our names in the sand when we left our cove of dreams you made tide tidy our memory I carred the gulls and day birds to make wing music til our night returned ©Dark |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and sky was mirrored in my waves curling into myself as I crashed upon the shore... sounds wet, doesn't it?  beautiful. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
dam p at least ms serene... thank you babe for the touch good morning |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
loved this! ~tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This feels like a song... a wonderful way to start the day... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
tiers, humble thanks for the touch.. ms sunshine, good morning lady, thank you for singing along... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooo lovely, sweet friend, this too felt like some kind of song reading it with soft tropical jazz melodies! (big hugggssssss) Your wonderful words always radiate with such soft passion and heart, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
As gentle as a lover's sigh.... Good morning to you too Dark. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Noah, humble thanks my friend, I appreiciate you. Enchantress, bless you eyes and a slow hug good morning to you. thanks lady |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
we pulled clouds over our entwine like blankets of damp warm that hid our hands and how they made the love myst we erased our names in the sand when we left our cove of dreams ================================ we pulled clouds over our entwine and how they made the love myst I do so enjoy the way your poetic mind works.... you give a whole new meaning to the word damp. lol whew!! must have been some weekend When your own emptiness is all thats getting through |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
purely geographical ms janet marie this capture of the dawn at rincon beach .... true story number 417 (wink) thanks saxy one for your touch |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
How I love your morning melodies. There's the man I chose. There's my territory.....Shakira |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms phachi you make them better just be being there to wave thanks lady |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Good Morning, DS The man of sky makes beauty with words each dawn. A wave at you over tall buildings. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
DS darling boy again your writing is outstandingly beautiful in its form it’s utterly utterly breathtaking in its beauty. Your heart is truly in this, I love it utterly utterly. Sometimes I swear you write the words in my soul in accents of pale whisper on the edge of remember when, this is one of those times Perfect darling heart utterly utterly perfect. And yes I love it utterly As always Mushy    To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie thanks to you lady for your waves and reads marsha, thank you for your darling utterlies, you are too sweet babe |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger Where gravity exists so lives the tick. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Sy, have not seen many/any on sea or in sky but the wind is a tic perhaps as it suck the blood of damp from sighs and eyes thanks amigo for the read |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thank god yr here. I love your words. She said burn ... together. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
BSQ...thanks my friend..I appreciate you |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'I knew you as ocean in the mornings when the sun moved closer to bring his new day you called me man of sky then we danced there at our edge place our mouths whispered to purple mountains we made kisses where we touched and the sun looked the other way' These lines remind me of the gorgeous sunrise I watched on the beach this weekend...I love the images this brings to mind...excellent write, as always, DS! sp    I've been down this road forever, |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
snowpants you must have been real close to me was seeing such a sunrise too west coast side of it thanks for the read and review |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
you made tide tidy our memory Love that line most of all~ The tides are endless in their motion and bound to the time. Dare we ever turn away and fail to appreciate what comes naturally. Nice~ [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (05-14-2002 02:37 AM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
gentle swaying to your morning music Ds...loved this one. Like a red brick, |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
There were just too many lines I loved in this sunrise you showed us, so I will say...okay, I am patiently waiting until the next sunrise or sunset. Simply fantastic writing. Let's spend less time worrying about when our life is going to end, and more on when it's going to start! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Bluezy...thanks hon, I appreciate you walking by and making little prints in the sand GS, thanks sweet lady for the whispers...sow hugs to you mysteria, thank you lady..you are welcome to come and visit this piece of the ocean any time ..seems these sun rise/sets are everyday now |
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