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mirror man
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since 2001-01-08
Posts 814


0 posted 2002-05-14 01:25 AM


yes,

i hear you
i hear you
i hear you.

but,

who
are you talking to?


signed --
not a ghost
not a rose
not a reflection
not an echo
not satan
not god

not
who knows what
you're thinking of.

not any of those.

[This message has been edited by mirror man (05-15-2002 01:57 AM).]

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BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2002-05-14 01:51 AM


Ineresting~ I'll bet what you're thinking
isn't even close to what I'm thinking!  

Accordionmaid
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since 2001-10-28
Posts 153
MA/USA
2 posted 2002-05-14 10:28 AM


Hey, I like this.  

"I think I go home."
(Garbo)

mirror man
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3 posted 2002-05-14 10:51 AM


BluesSerenade -- I don't know.  What are you thinking?  

Accordionmaid -- thank you.  If I do anything well, it's being confused.

RosePetal
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4 posted 2002-05-14 11:09 AM


mirror man, you always capture my interest!
you keep me thinking and that is a good thing

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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5 posted 2002-05-14 11:12 AM


mirror man
I think you were looking in a mirror. Enjoyed

mirror man
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6 posted 2002-05-15 01:31 AM


RosePetal -- thank you.  I'm thinking somebody's thinking I'm thinking they're thinking something.  This is deep stuff.  

Seymour -- yes, I am talking to myself, apparently.

[This message has been edited by mirror man (05-15-2002 08:04 AM).]

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