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February 1996
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February 1996 |
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Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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February 1996  Gold in the skies lingered there in your eyes on that February eve so many years ago as brilliant found its way to ground as if to wrap around us just so You were made strong with young intent quivering dreams seemed to suit your mind a nervous mother, me, I just let you drive while you owned the road, your way to find The last leg of the last journey of two we’d come far in our knowing of hearts gold in the skies lingered there in your eyes, I keep this, our separation’s start. ~*~ Dedicated to my Daughter Photography by K. R. Jungel [This message has been edited by Sunshine (05-13-2002 11:01 PM).] |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea Hugging you for this sunset memory, so needed to display the color of love. |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
karilea~ so very loving, a keeper for sure, for the memories this touched.... Lauren~ I would rather have one breath of his hair, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karilea, I don't believe I have ever seen such a brilliant sunset... Such an outpouring of love for you daughter. Beautiful...just beautiful. Thank you for my last read before sleepy time. ~Hugs~ |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A beautiful photo and a perfectly written poem, Karilea... I have a couple of very interesting "teaching my kids to drive" stories, but I think I'll follow your example and write them into a poem.  ~loving hugsLyra |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
nice and nice.... ms sunshine, you do it well enjoyed the views from your eyes and your heart |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
May such a glorious sunset bring an equally inspiring sunrise... Hugs..  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now I have no idea why that poem made me so sad, but it did. Sometimes my brain and emotions each have their own highway. That was a lovely picture, perhaps it is meant to be shared. Let's spend less time worrying about when our life is going to end, and more on when it's going to start! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Pulling ever gently on the apron string... whispering it is time to go... Smiling as a hidden tear wells up... Such memories... Beautiful poem and pic KJ...love them both. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always sparkle with sunshine and I know your daughter will grow and love this always and will aso find her place in the sun forever to dream and laugh! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
your words are also golden, Karilea..... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I love the picture and the poem, Sunshine. *S* Both are very beautiful. *S* |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You Poets are Perfect People... Thank you! |
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