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ecrivan
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0 posted 2002-06-01 03:35 PM



Do seeds know which way
westerly winds will blow them
to the ground to lay?


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1 posted 2002-06-01 03:38 PM




(smiles) Oh Martin, I too asked myself this question once, for whenever I blow the seeds of a dandelion and watch the breeze scatter them about, I always wonder if somehow God is controlling their destination so a place that may be barren and desolate will be sprinkled with seeds there and dandelions will bloom there! (sigh) This is a miracle of a haiku, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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ethome
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2 posted 2002-06-01 03:40 PM


I'd say the ones travelling north east west or south  just might know in some strange way...incomprehensible nature's force..........oxygen is needed everywhere!
Good write!!

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3 posted 2002-06-01 03:42 PM



Well there you go again, twisting my mind.
I love the seeds that, once hitting the ground,
take it upon themselves to screw themselves
into the dirt...
I never get tired of being amazed by
nature's own clever manueverings...

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4 posted 2002-06-01 03:59 PM


Exceptional!
In these few words the conjure of so many bold and beautiful journeys...all in the blind of faith. ThisDiamond

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5 posted 2002-06-01 06:30 PM


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6 posted 2002-06-01 06:39 PM


Love this Martin!
So much said in so few words.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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7 posted 2002-06-01 07:13 PM


You say so much with so few words, Martin...
and I think thats an excellent question...

~ windy hugs

Lyra

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ecrivan
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8 posted 2002-06-02 10:02 AM


Thankyou all for sharing, I'm indebted to nature's management on this one


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