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Tranquility (Greeneyes Challenge)
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Warmth glowing from heaven flowing into the river of dreams collecting within the mists of eternity, where time, in stillness stands against the mountains of evermore and each breath captures the peace of tranquility..... (what I see in the second picture in Greeneyes Challenge, kinda far fetched huh??? lol...) /pip/Forum7/HTML/000447.html Like a red brick, in a white wall somebodies brush forgot to paint... lonely....(as sung by Tracy Lawrence..) [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (05-13-2002 09:41 PM).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Deb darling girl and keeper of dreams, YOU know I’d love this. As I believe I’ve mentioned once or twice before YOU can really write, this is utterly outstanding. No one manages to write like this and this darling heart is utterly utterly superb truly one of your best and yes you’ve taken the challenge and surpassed it Utterly utterly perfect As always Mushy    To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 [This message has been edited by Marsha (05-13-2002 09:45 PM).] |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Donna~ NOTHING, nothing you write is far fetched, in fact I found so much peace in this..thank you thank you....you do wonders with your words.....I  sweet lady, cheer up and BIG OLE BEAR HUGSSSSS....ya smiling yet??? or do I need to hop a plane and come tickle ya???? LOL be well here if ya need....Lauren~ I would rather have one breath of his hair, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Marsha, I do so appreciate your kindness always to my words....hugs to you. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Oh dear Lauren, you have no idea how much I needed that smile, and yep, it's there. Girl you hop a plane and come see me, I'm sure we would find much to do and much to laugh about without the tickling party...lol.....I really needed that smile tonight.....thank YOU Like a red brick, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Donna this is beautiful and so tranquil....love it! ~Hugs~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Nancy, lol, thats just exactly what I saw....peaceful......tranquil..... thanks for seeing it too!! Hugs. Like a red brick, |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Geesh! I think it is time for a nap....this is so peaceful...makes me want to just curl up with a smile on my face and dream... Beautifully done... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Magnus, I thank you. Speaking of that nap, a good nights sleep even better, and with the images Lauren has left us with this pm dreams should definately be peaceful. Hugs and thank you so much. Like a red brick, |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiling...yanno? I might suggest just a one word change? Instead of tranquility? How 'bout SERENITY?  Just kidding, and gently too, I hope. I love this one as well...they are all interesting. Sort of like the old "ink blot" test, we see what we want to see... Fascinating...and you just stop hanging yer head you! (wagging finger atchoo! This is Great!)  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Karen, I think serenity would actually word rather well there. Did you know that name has been my alter ego more than once? lol...Thanks for the kind comments and yep, it was gentle enough...no worries there. Hugs to you. *ducking her head as Serenity gives her a scolding* *w* Like a red brick, |
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