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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2002-05-13 07:37 AM



Until I find your deeper meaning…

I think I shall review once more

& Let imagination soar

A journey no one else can see

But the talented poet & me...

~Tier {R.T.}
2/6/02



"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

[This message has been edited by Tiersdin (05-13-2002 07:38 AM).]

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2002-05-13 08:23 AM


Giggling at myself here, ya got ME! I read it once, and thought, "huh?" came back again, then came back AGAIN...and now I'm grinning as the lightbulb went off in my head. OH!!!! Smiles to you, enjoyed, o talented poet!
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2 posted 2002-05-13 08:40 AM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always shimmer with such imagination that always inspires me and has me daydreaming! (kiss on cheek) This is a very lovely poem, sweet friend, never change the special person you are, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tiersdin, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Tiersdin
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3 posted 2002-05-13 08:52 AM


Thank you Serenity! *smiles* I appreciate your taking the time to "find the deeper meaning" *hugs*

Noah, you inspire me more than you'll ever know!

*smiles*

~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2002-05-13 09:10 AM


enjoyed this piece

clever moves

Tiersdin
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5 posted 2002-05-13 11:43 AM


Thank you, Dark one, means a lot!

*smiles*
~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

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6 posted 2002-05-13 03:53 PM



You want my 'Honest opinion,' you say...

me likes.


bsquirrel
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7 posted 2002-05-13 04:01 PM


I know the feeling. And as long as y' enjoy what y' do, and are writin' verse of this caliber, others'll come to understand to.

Loved it!

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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