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Kevin
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0 posted 2002-05-10 03:53 PM


Running from the sound of footsteps
Looking back on tracks I’ve made
Only my prints in the moonlight
Running from a Masquerade
Searching for a clear cut answer
I wont read between the lines
I’ll just pretend I can’t find it
Hide all my internal signs
Someday I will start to tire
Someday I will turn around
To see all my loved ones running
After me to slow me down


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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2002-05-10 04:55 PM




I like this Kevin...very much....nice rhythm to it.

M

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2 posted 2002-05-10 05:02 PM




(smiles) This is a fabulous perspective of wisdom, sweet friend, yes, always play it safe and never let it become so complicated, just listen to your heart and let those you love support you and all the answers will just come sailing to you like a plastic bag fluttering in the air during a gale! (big hugggssssss) This is poignant, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kevin, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-05-10 09:38 PM



It seems a shame to let this gem slip by without replying.

So I won’t!

Thanks for the chance to read and reply.

Duncan
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4 posted 2002-05-10 09:58 PM


Searching for a clear cut answer
I wont read between the lines
I’ll just pretend I can’t find it
Hide all my internal signs

Good lines, these.

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5 posted 2002-05-10 10:56 PM


There are times the sum of the parts is better than the parts. The lines are very good...the finished product is brilliant work.

Good to see you, Kevin

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6 posted 2002-05-13 03:45 PM


"To see all my loved ones running
After me to slow me down"

You come home Thursday Kev, just keep running for three more days-thats all you need.  Then we will be here to run for you.  

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7 posted 2002-05-13 04:03 PM


Ooo.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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