Open Poetry #20 |
Racing Life |
Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
Running from the sound of footsteps Looking back on tracks I’ve made Only my prints in the moonlight Running from a Masquerade Searching for a clear cut answer I wont read between the lines I’ll just pretend I can’t find it Hide all my internal signs Someday I will start to tire Someday I will turn around To see all my loved ones running After me to slow me down |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I like this Kevin...very much....nice rhythm to it. M |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) This is a fabulous perspective of wisdom, sweet friend, yes, always play it safe and never let it become so complicated, just listen to your heart and let those you love support you and all the answers will just come sailing to you like a plastic bag fluttering in the air during a gale! (big hugggssssss) This is poignant, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kevin, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Phaedrus Member
since 2002-01-26
Posts 180 |
It seems a shame to let this gem slip by without replying. So I won’t! Thanks for the chance to read and reply. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Searching for a clear cut answer I wont read between the lines I’ll just pretend I can’t find it Hide all my internal signs Good lines, these. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
There are times the sum of the parts is better than the parts. The lines are very good...the finished product is brilliant work. Good to see you, Kevin |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
"To see all my loved ones running After me to slow me down" You come home Thursday Kev, just keep running for three more days-thats all you need. Then we will be here to run for you. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Ooo. She said burn ... together. |
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