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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-05-13 06:30 PM



On a balmy Summer's evening
We stand together on the sand
My skin begins to tingle
As you reach down for my hand

Love flows in perfect harmony
Moving gently with the tide
So much tenderness and devotion
On waves of passion we now ride

You run your fingers through my hair
And whisper gently in my ear
You say those three perfect words
That you know I love to hear

As the sun sets on our love
On the sand we stop to rest
I move in a little closer
And put my head upon your chest

The water has turned to amber
And the sun has finally set
Such nights of love and romance
We never will forget

Suetang

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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1 posted 2002-05-13 06:35 PM


Suetang,
you have created a spectrunm of romance here. Softly stunning.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2002-05-13 07:49 PM


lovely Sue
*s
M

SmartChick
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3 posted 2002-05-13 09:30 PM


This is so beautiful.
Alan
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4 posted 2002-05-13 10:28 PM


Sue...this is wonderful. Enjoyed the read and the thoughts it gave me.
alan

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5 posted 2002-05-14 08:31 AM




(sigh) You truly are the Queen of Romance, sweet friend, I know your love will always make you so very happy just as he will always be happy to have you and share magical memories like this forever! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 2002-05-14 10:24 PM


Very romantic and no wonder (thanks for the sundown picture of your home - it was beautiful)

Let's spend less time worrying about when our life is going to end, and more on when it's going to start!

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2002-05-15 06:06 AM


Oh what a night...James
ethome
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New Brunswick Canada
8 posted 2002-05-15 06:07 AM


Very very nicely done Sue!
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