Open Poetry #20 |
A Night Of Love And Romance |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
On a balmy Summer's evening We stand together on the sand My skin begins to tingle As you reach down for my hand Love flows in perfect harmony Moving gently with the tide So much tenderness and devotion On waves of passion we now ride You run your fingers through my hair And whisper gently in my ear You say those three perfect words That you know I love to hear As the sun sets on our love On the sand we stop to rest I move in a little closer And put my head upon your chest The water has turned to amber And the sun has finally set Such nights of love and romance We never will forget Suetang |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Suetang, you have created a spectrunm of romance here. Softly stunning. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
lovely Sue *s M |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is so beautiful. |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Sue...this is wonderful. Enjoyed the read and the thoughts it gave me. alan |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) You truly are the Queen of Romance, sweet friend, I know your love will always make you so very happy just as he will always be happy to have you and share magical memories like this forever! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Very romantic and no wonder (thanks for the sundown picture of your home - it was beautiful) Let's spend less time worrying about when our life is going to end, and more on when it's going to start! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Oh what a night...James |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very very nicely done Sue! |
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