Open Poetry #20 |
Hints And Indications |
HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Hints And Indications If when feeling blank What could you find With nothing to pen Can you read a mind Can you see my eyes Brown, blue or green How would you start Are minds ever seen If without the writing I leave a blank space Could you know me Do you view my face Can you see emotion Upon this very day Could you read me If I’ve nothing to say What of my strengths The way that I write Hints and indications Of left brain or right Do you read feelings Open them and view Did I leave my mark On the minds of you Hope |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Can you see emotion Upon this very day Could you read me If I’ve nothing to say This poem read so lyrically, it was truly a pleasure to hear. And I loved the pondering of it. Very cool. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks for reading Duncan and for your kind thoughtful reply , yes it does leave one to ponder if we cannot see the naked eye hope |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Words do open doors Hope. Wonderful read alan |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Wow, this is a wonderful poem on honesty and body language, sweet friend, I think it is important to be read when one doesn't speak, though I think it is important to always speak up if one is ever going to help or relate to you! (kiss on cheek) This is powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks for you reply Alan are you open ?? "Knock , Knock " Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks for your sweet , kind , thoughtful reply Noah yes writing this did make me think do we know the person , behind the pen and ink ? Hope |
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