Open Poetry #20 |
Wildflowers on the Wind [repost w/personal artwork] |
Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wildflowers on the Wind Orchids and roses, fragrant and rare are not this lady, so do not compare admire the view, breathe in one or two be as much at home under skies of blue where winds blow, meadowlarks sing wildflowers grow ‘round her in rings tensile strength, hidden from view emotional ties one by two a slave to sounds, music or word drawn to dreams, she’s reassured where winds blow, meadowlarks sing wildflowers grow ‘round her in rings she’ll pick wildflowers, cornflowers blue smell the lupine, soft purpling hues her garden grows gentian all along content by her springs, with cardinal’s song where winds blow, meadowlarks sing wildflowers grow ‘round her in rings she’s not of lace, more broadcloth blue she doesn’t wear silk, cotton will do her smile genuine, she’ll not laugh at you but more at herself is what she will do where winds blow, meadowlarks sing wildflowers grow ‘round her in rings don’t be amazed at her mercurial eyes don’t ask if her love is her best surprise it’s in her to center down in your heart in simple naiveté her true love starts where winds blow, meadowlarks sing wildflowers grow ‘round her in rings circa 10/2000 revised 15 November 01 repost 12 May 02 I promise, Ron - I won't get nuts with the photos! [This message has been edited by Sunshine (05-13-2002 03:46 PM).] |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Like the blending that made the meadow lark sing with words so special. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Kari...I think this is a poem which says a lot about the poet...the person...and who they really are.... You have said it beautifully... of a lady, with class....but no frills... thank you for sharing this beautiful piece of your soul... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Karilea...perfectly presented. ~Mother's Day Hugs to You~ |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Just lovely! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Sunshine - oh, I love this one. Makes me long to be out in my garden with the wildflowers, awww..but it is raining. I will just close my eyes and pretend. That I am allowed to do cause it is Mother's Day!! Happy Mother's Day sweet poetess!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ah hah...the shutterbug's gotca! This was lovely and I tell you if you hadn't of put a picture there I was going to , this was beautiful. This also puts me in mind of another painting by Waterhouse that is a favorite of mine. I won't clutter this thread up with it, but here is the link Sunshine, have a look... http://www.primenet.com/~byoder/jwwind.jpg We should spend less time worrying about when our life is going to end and more on when it's going to start! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Ooohhhhhhhh...I love this, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always shine with such beautiful views of nature and beauty! (big hugggssssss) May the meadowlarks and flowers always sing before your heart, sweet friend, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahhh, Sissie, you paint a beautiful picture. It is easy to visualize every bit..very well done..very gentle smile |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I wish there were a smiley face animation that grows petals all around it like a flower, then perhaps a bee could come by and land on its "nose" or something.... But since that's not to be, let me just say, really enjoyed! She said burn ... together. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh WOW!!!! sunshiny girl this is truly devine, both your words and the picture...thanks so much for sharing ~HUGS~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Karilea, this is wonderful, it's one of your best! I'm keeping this~ Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Karilea...this is so beautiful, and I love the photo also... ~windy hugs Lyra |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I'll take cotton any day.....and beautiful poetry like this |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
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Gorgeous...and I've a ton of questions about the pic...sigh..I'll e ya, kari...but this got me all excited as it's something I've been wanting to get into for some time... tossing roses! |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Beautiful! but then what else can anyone expect from the soul of you? hmmm? *smiles* ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sunshine you do have a way of showing color enjoyed it ms |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Lovely! I love poetry about nature. Deb |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I'm not surprised at all. . . I always knew that you saw the world differently. . . this confirms it. . . wonderful my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
A poet and a photographer...your talents abound Lovely on both accounts |
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