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A Place I Visit Often
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A Place I Visit Often |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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 The water is as clear as crystal Giving the appearance of being glazed Each and every time I come here I am in awe and totally amazed I walk this beach quite often A place where I go to collect my thoughts Most times I come here alone When I'm feeling out of sorts I come here mostly to unwind And make sure my pen is in hand For the scenery here is so inspiring In this beautiful part of the land I absorb the peace and tranquility As I inhale the warm salty air I feel relaxed in my own special world Feeling as though I'm the only one there A group of seagulls huddle together Drawing warmth from the golden sand A stray gull eyes me suspiciously Before snatching some bread from my hand The seasons paint many a masterpiece From still waters to angry seas But there is no denying the enjoyment And the neverending pleasure given to me Suetang |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Sue, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I know just how you feel; I wish I lived near the ocean because every time I go there I feel so very lovesick, it always enchants me so much and I can't help but cry just dreaming maybe someday I can finally have my true love and hold her hand walking down that coast and seeing those seagulls happily soar with her, whereas I feel so homesick living in this desert yearning for the rain to come! (sigh) This is so gorgeous, may you always find delight in the simple things nature offers, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Sue, This is such a beautiful poem, your picture is not there, but I could envision the scenery you present with your words splendidly. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us. ~Dawn~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wonderful word pictures...well done! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
The picture didn't show, but it doesn't matter -- your words painted much better pictures than some graphic could. I was there. She said burn ... together. |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Sue, I think this is one of your best. I loved the description of your favorite place. Shenachie |
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