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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-05-13 09:43 PM

Reaching out, emptiness finds the feel
What once was a love, love everlasting
Holding only the air of breath from in

Silence

surrounds
takes my breath
devours me

Tears of loneliness stream down as fresh brine
becoming pools of salt on desert seas
Trodden by a thousand beats of lonely

Whispers

fall on deafness
echo in the soul of life
unanswered

Arms of strength now weightless and limp beside
Sighs of desire no longer emit, lips close
Kisses given in vain as moist kiss dries

Goodbyes

ring from bells
cracked of the heart
bleeding
upon the ground
of life..

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

1 posted 2002-05-13 10:00 PM

Magnus darling boy this is wonderful writing, you never cease to amaze me, without doubt you are a fabulous writer. The detail and emotion you have layered into this outstanding piece of art is amazing. I am totally captivated by the sadness and the aching loneliness that positively pulsates through this wonderful poem.

You are a writer darling boy a fabulous outstandingly good writer.

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2002-05-13 10:05 PM

MY dearest darling girl....

YOU have proven to be....MY number one
Wench!

You never cease to applaud my words...and
I am most humble to receive them...

Thanx darling girl....You are utterly
fantabulous....and splendiferous....or
something like that...

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-05-13 11:11 PM

Ah Magnus, this leaves a very sad ache...a hard read, a good write...

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

4 posted 2002-05-13 11:20 PM

Barry~

Haunting, sad, lonely...but you do it so nicely.....hugssss

Lauren~

I would rather have one breath of his hair,
one kiss of his mouth,
one touch of his hand
than an eternity without it.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2002-05-13 11:29 PM

Whispers

fall on deafness
echo in the soul of life
unanswered

These are real feelings that wait for answers that often times never come.
I so enjoy your verses of the heart Magnus~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-05-13 11:44 PM

Barry, so hauntingly sad...
and to think that I thought
I was your number one wench!!
Knights! Ya just never know!
~Quick hug and goodnight~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

7 posted 2002-05-13 11:55 PM

Tears of loneliness stream down as fresh brine
becoming pools of salt on desert seas
Trodden by a thousand beats of lonely

So sad and yet so beautiful, Barry

~sad hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

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