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Promise Me
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(Sorry it's been a while since I've posted any poems; I've felt lonely and sad lately and have been yearning so much for my dreams) Promise Me By: Noah Eaton 5/12/02 Sometimes I dream so much of you I feel this debility Wondering if you are thinking the same for me Deep inside of me arouses this imploding curiousity If you've been thinking of me If you've been thinking of me Every night I need to find a new pillow to cry on Wherever I go you find my way singing in my hearts nest Head over heels I fall just waiting for a key To release me from this asylum If I could escape all these pretexts and spiritual propaganda And find a way to speak those three simple words ear to ear I'm sweeping all my dust bunnies under the crawlspace Don't let this broom's bristles wear out and erode While I'm spring cleaning for our honeymoon... Promise me Promise me You'll believe someday we can be Promise me Promise me Without you my heavens fall and bleed Promise me Promise me I'm down to your feet Just promise me you'll always love me I don't want my world to be gray Up above I believe the lord is trying To find a way to have us embrace together I never want to mistake a dove for a pigeon anymore I love you so much and can't let you go Where are you going, where have I gone, what is this we're thinking Have we arrived there or is it just in propinquity? I want to prove every prophet wrong that claims There was nothing ever between you and me You are the one I want to love forever, the girl of my dreams Promise me Promise me You'll believe someday we can be Promise me Promise me Without you my heavens fall and bleed Promise me Promise me I'm down to your feet Just promise me you'll always love me I don't want my world to be gray I don't want my world to be gray My world always seems so gray If you disappear... "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (05-12-2002 08:42 PM).] |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Awwwww Noah, you are too young and vibrant to be so down in the dumps as they say. Believe in your dreams and keep writing your poetry. Love will find a way. Chris  Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Noah darling boy OH my word this is excellent writing, what can I say darling heart your writing shines through every single word. Sometimes Noah love we can want too much, we get so caught in the want and need of what we want we seem to lose the connection of the equation. Take care of yourself Noah darling boy. Your writing as always is excellent, full of your heart   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Oh Noah...this is so very sad  Poetry is such great therapy... please try to write some more to get your mind off your loneliness... and you write so well too!  ~hugs of sadnessLyra |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Noah my friend, The connection and the feelings are effortless... The "what to do about it" complicated... Love to your life. ThisDiamond |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Don't set yourself up dear Noah, promises can be broken as quickly as they are made. Had they not been made in the first place the disappointment wouldn't be so hard to take. I am always in awe of how you wear your heart on your sleeve and let it all hang out...I do enjoy your writing. Hugs to you~ |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Dear Noah, your words are always a haunting melody to the heart. thank you, ~tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Awww ~huggles~ dear Noah  it'll work out my friend Noah your poem is a fabulous outpouring of emotions, I do hope things work out and you can get out of the DUMPS ~HUGS~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Written like a prayer, sweet noah! touching, as always. And? sigh...no advice from me, I'm afraid...just hugs. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Noah whatever will be will be...we only have control of our own heart...I'm hoping good things happen for you...James |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
From deep within the heart this poem erupted... "I'm sweeping all my dust bunnies under the crawlspace Don't let this broom's bristles wear out and erode While I'm spring cleaning for our honeymoon..." ~ that was my favorite part. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
   S M I L E Y O U very touching, cheer up....HUGSSS Lauren~ I would rather have one breath of his hair, one kiss of his mouth, one touch of his hand than an eternity without it. [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (05-13-2002 12:20 PM).] |
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Muys Member
since 2002-04-06
Posts 389The Netherlands |
I promise I will pray for You and hope it works Love Muys |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
What? No one's used this animation yet?  Loved it. She said burn ... together. |
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Accordionmaid Member
since 2001-10-28
Posts 153MA/USA |
Lov-er-ly, sad...hope things cheer up! "I think I go home." |
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