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Suetang
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0 posted 2002-05-09 11:11 PM


You can scratch upon the surface
To reveal a piece of me
Or you can delve a little deeper
And into my soul you will see

My words speak many truths
Of this person I've come to be
You've witnessed my many emotions
I've exposed my feelings for all to see

I feel more comfortable in giving
Much more than I am to receive
But one thing I know for certain
It is in love that I firmly believe

My father is part of the reason
I am who I am today
We were so very much alike
His love still guides me along the way

Even though his death brought sorrow
Something special he gave to me
His love respect and kindness
Which you will find in my poetry

Suetang

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-05-09 11:16 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, and you are a true angel and will always be your daddy's little girl, sweet friend, your father will always love you so so much and is so proud you're going on to share all the love he shared with you to the world and I know there will come a time where you will reunite and you will always be with him forever! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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Member Patricius
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2 posted 2002-05-09 11:32 PM


Sue:  Your father's guiding spifrit does come through in your poetry.  I was very close to my father also and I know how that bond goes on, even after death.

Betty Lou Hebert

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3 posted 2002-05-13 06:42 PM


Your a peach Sue.  I've thought that since we've come to know eachother.  It doesn't surprise me that you are a lot like your Father.  By your writings about him I could tell he had great qualities.  I feel that way about my Mother who is where your Father is now.  Right in Heaven... God Bless You, Your friend always, Roger


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4 posted 2002-05-13 06:56 PM


'Even though his death brought sorrow
Something special he gave to me
His love respect and kindness
Which you will find in my poetry'

And in your heart and soul. This was a touching write. Thank you for sharing who you are with so many. Hugs, Marti

" My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother."

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5 posted 2002-05-13 08:01 PM


Sue,  he is here....all around us...

For your love and words bring him into
PiP and into our hearts as well...

Thank You..

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