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devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

0 posted 2002-05-13 02:01 PM

Would you mind
~too much~
If I just crawled
into your lap-
Securing myself
against
The steady sway
of your heartbeat?

Would it be alright
~just now~
If I drown
My insecurities
within the depths
of your smile?

Would you let me
~for this moment~
hide myself
inside your arms
within
a solitary caress?

Would you mind
~just now~
Saving triumph
for the dawn
And just making love-
Within an embrace?

*This is a softer one from adult so bear with me*

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

1 posted 2002-05-13 02:09 PM

I'd forgotten how much I needed this poem. Thank you.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

2 posted 2002-05-13 02:47 PM

Would I mind...just now...?

Not at all.....

INclan

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2002-05-13 03:06 PM

bearing with you my friend. . .

wonderful. . . I like it. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

4 posted 2002-05-13 03:45 PM

*sigh*
Did I mention I love it that you're around?
I'm bearing with you on this one with no trouble at all.

How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so.
~Sarah MacLachlan~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2002-05-13 04:59 PM

pretty darn mushy
kissy huggy licky stuff
well ok..if ya wanna

enjoyed it babe

Christopher

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

6 posted 2002-05-13 05:21 PM

quote:
Would it be alright
~just now~
If I drown
My insecurities
within the depths
of your smile?

mushy it may be, but i love this stanza. tres cool tanya.

C

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2002-05-13 05:30 PM

I don't believe that I would mind...James

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

8 posted 2002-05-13 05:30 PM

A softer one from adult but still very sensuous! Sometimes a good hug is better than anything else on the face of the earth!

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

9 posted 2002-05-13 10:08 PM

Mike- I know this one hit with you...I thank you for your insight dearest...

INclan- being an Indiana girl myself...I thought you'd say so..

John- we have always understood each other..ty

Temptress- glad to see you around too lady..has been awhile!!!

DS-takin you in...
ty sweets

Chris- ty for enjoying the mushy side of me...

JamesMichael-ty dearest

ethome- don't I know it...took me years to perfect it htough..

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

BrandeeM
Junior Member

since 2002-05-01

Posts 45

10 posted 2002-05-13 10:10 PM

Always KNEW you had it in you to write like this!!!!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

11 posted 2002-05-14 08:11 AM

(sigh) This is sooooo sensually beautiful, sweet friend, I believe just the thought of hugging someone close you love is the ost beautiful feeling of all and crying happily knowing what it is like to have someone who can understand you close to your heart! (kiss on cheek) This is so lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tanya, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

12 posted 2002-05-14 09:05 AM

Oh WOW!!!
Devina dear this is one beautiful write, enjoyed reading very much

==============================
Would you mind
~just now~
Saving triumph
for the dawn
And just making love-
Within an embrace?
==============================
just devine~
~HUGS~
Tracie

Opeth
Senior Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 1543
The Ravines

13 posted 2002-05-14 09:08 AM

It may be softer, but it still tells very well. Enjoyed!

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