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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2002-05-11 10:30 PM



From the heart flows the words
Of the stars, clouds and birds
For the fancy and discerning
Of the inner fire brightly burning

From this thought to this life
Of the rock, wave and knife
For the changing and the cheer
Of the love waiting here

From this small hand a gift
Of the dreams as they sift
For the worth rich and deep
Of investments to keep

So submerged in the flow
To your heart I shall go

Copyright Kkh 5/11/02

© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2002-05-11 10:39 PM


I love the submerging into the heart..

*s
M

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2 posted 2002-05-11 10:43 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is lovely, sweet friend, may you forever dive into the deep blue of his heart and find true tranquility and comfort there forever and ever! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Tiersdin
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3 posted 2002-05-11 10:58 PM


I like the flow of this...

Enjoyed!

~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

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4 posted 2002-05-11 11:06 PM


Kathy,  your poems always flow so very
nicely...and as a kicker...they make
perfect sense too...

Excellent!!!

passing shadows
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5 posted 2002-05-16 04:26 AM


very good, nice flow, great first stanza...kinda enchanting, whimsical
JamesMichael
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6 posted 2002-05-16 06:36 AM


Like this diamond...James
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7 posted 2002-05-16 08:05 AM


Very smooth and elegantly stated ...
this diamond appears to be flawless.
Excellent piece!

BloomingRose
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8 posted 2002-05-16 08:43 AM


Nice flow of lovely words.
Enjoyed!

Deb

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9 posted 2002-05-16 09:10 AM


Kathleen,  Beautiful rhythm and flow to this piece.  
Enjoyed this one much.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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Deep in the heart
10 posted 2002-05-17 11:51 AM


When you come up for air I wish you the happiest of lives

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

ThisDiamond
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11 posted 2002-05-17 02:33 PM


As always, I find such support and so many gentle words here. Thank you and most happy lives to all of you. ThisDiamond
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