Open Poetry #20 |
Silken Stream |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
From the heart flows the words Of the stars, clouds and birds For the fancy and discerning Of the inner fire brightly burning From this thought to this life Of the rock, wave and knife For the changing and the cheer Of the love waiting here From this small hand a gift Of the dreams as they sift For the worth rich and deep Of investments to keep So submerged in the flow To your heart I shall go Copyright Kkh 5/11/02 |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I love the submerging into the heart.. *s M |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is lovely, sweet friend, may you forever dive into the deep blue of his heart and find true tranquility and comfort there forever and ever! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I like the flow of this... Enjoyed! ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Kathy, your poems always flow so very nicely...and as a kicker...they make perfect sense too... Excellent!!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very good, nice flow, great first stanza...kinda enchanting, whimsical |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like this diamond...James |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Very smooth and elegantly stated ... this diamond appears to be flawless. Excellent piece! |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Nice flow of lovely words. Enjoyed! Deb |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Kathleen, Beautiful rhythm and flow to this piece. Enjoyed this one much. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
When you come up for air I wish you the happiest of lives Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
As always, I find such support and so many gentle words here. Thank you and most happy lives to all of you. ThisDiamond |
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