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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
I am ... at this moment as I've always been thee enigma of championed hope the herald of victories conquest and justice to moral decrepitation I am... with certitude the mythic harbinger a simple feather from the angel of death the might against the abyss of chaos the dream lived within the uncertainty I am... of ancient memory and futures claim the spoke of truth and wheel of greatness the glory of all that is righteous and good the dilemma that spites the rage of darkness I am... a true shining beacon pure and untainted the cleanser of all that is wrong and evil sought by the moral filth but unreachable desired by the wicked but the prize of only One I am... forged of heart, and steel by the hand of light the shear force of order in the soul of man the unstoppable belief of good and rightness the true heart of the once and future King I AM  EXCALIBUR James Parker Haley (C)2002 [This message has been edited by Parker (05-10-2002 07:01 PM).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I am... with certitude the mythic harbinger a simple feather from the angel of death the might against the abyss of chaos the dream lived within the uncertainty I am... of ancient memory and futures claim the spoke of truth and wheel of greatness the glory of all that is righteous and good the dilemma that spites the rage of darkness =============================== You are P-man...poet of exception  Well this is very very cool....and yes... a different kind of write for you... I like your style and your presentation here..creative and bold...love the flair of drama and classic story telling. Knight your muse for this one sweet tease  wayyy cool mothyme When your own emptiness is all thats getting through |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Wow! I love this!!!! Very good sir.  |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
You am. Cool direction you're going in, Park. Me likes. Cor |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Parker...bold, strong. Fantastic.....Excalibur! I bow to thee sire. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I am smiling! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thee art blade of most strong steel within the grip of clutching stone Yield not but to one of Kin'gs feel till then thee doth stand proud, alone. Excellent write Parker..... Love the imagery and the ending... Loved the whole darn poem, OK? WAS A VERY GOOD ONE!!! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 BRAVO!!! Oh James, this is excellent, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! (big hugggssssss) You truly are a knight in shining armour of great chivalry and largesse and you yield Excalibur with love and justice in your noble heart! (big hugggsssssss) You are a true champion of love and woirds, sweet friend, we all love you so much, God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Janet, thank you... i'm just dabbling in the Arthurian legend a bit.. deVine, thank you. Corinne, sweet poet its not the direction but the journey... or didn't you say that...lol Enchantress, thank you oh lady of the Lake. SunShine, Me too. Magnus, thank you for the great response. Noah, as always thank you. Parker |
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