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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-05-10 07:38 PM

When voices fade and whispers leave
as lightning flashes, thunder rolls
sparkling drops of quenching wet rain
fall silent as distant bell tolls

Morning dew blankets petals soft
upon the green, the matted floor
Birds sing melodic lover’s tunes
breezes softly open, close the door

Steps in time trail beyond the sight
as rays burn away welcome dew
A lover’s loft in wait of tryst
reflects a tone of passion’s hue.

Falling light bringing rise of stars
as hens return to nest and lay
Lovers lie in wait of the night
as fireflies flicker in display

When voices fade and whispers leave
a meadow green turns down the beds
as lovers lie in warm embrace
and passion's visions turn two heads

[This message has been edited by Magnus (05-10-2002 08:21 PM).]

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2002-05-10 07:45 PM

I have visions like that in my head all the time....loved it Barry *s
M

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2002-05-10 07:47 PM

Barry - this is excellent my friend. Like it muchly, very muchly....

BC

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2002-05-10 08:12 PM

Magnus,
When voices fade and whispers leave
a meadow green turns down the beds
as lovers lie in warm embrace
with visions of passion in heads
Well done.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-05-10 08:34 PM

Falling light bringing rise of stars
as hens return to nest and lay
Lovers lie in wait of the night
as fireflies flicker in display

When voices fade and whispers leave
a meadow green turns down the beds
as lovers lie in warm embrace
and passion's visions turn two heads
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Barry, penned as gentle as a whisper...
as soft as love's first kiss....
Love this....of course I do!
~Hugs to you poet sir~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2002-05-10 08:41 PM

M. joining the crowd of dreamers and
dreams...thank you...

BC...I muchly appreciate that you muchly
like this...thanx Bill..

Sy...always do enjoy your reviews...thanx.

Nance...I thought you might like this one.
I tried really hard to put a touch of
softness in it...Guess I did... Thanx
dear one...

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2002-05-10 08:45 PM

This one shall not fade.

'Tis a Keeper...

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2002-05-10 08:51 PM

KJ....you know how much I enjoy when you
tell me a poem of mine is a keeper....
Such a wonderful feeling that is...

Thank You!

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

8 posted 2002-05-10 09:07 PM

Magnus darling boy you are a weaver of stars incandescent dreams WOW this is utterly utterly delightful you’ve written an absolute diamond here. The flow of thought in this is wonderful and the rhyme absolutely divine. I love the image this brings so softly tender of lovers and soft whispered dreams

You know I adore this too don’t you, my sweet and dear friend, and do I forgive you for always outshining me? What do you think? Mmmm of course I do, how could I not

Truly excellent writing, I love it utterly utterly utterly.

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

[This message has been edited by Marsha (05-10-2002 09:08 PM).]

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

9 posted 2002-05-10 09:13 PM

Mushy, thank you darling girl for the
forgiving heart. I must say though....
that your talent is causing me to have to
write even better to stay ahead of you...

Your poetry is becoming utterly divine....

Thanx Musha/Marsha/Mushy....my most
favorite Wench!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2002-05-10 10:44 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, your poems always flow with the whispers of sincere and timeless romance, sweet friend, may the voice of courtship always lute to your ears and fill you with joy forever! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

11 posted 2002-05-10 11:28 PM

*sigh*

When voices fade and whispers leave
as lightning flashes, thunder rolls
sparkling drops of quenching wet rain
fall silent as distant bell tolls''

I do so enjoy reading your words....another beauty Barry~

Lauren~

I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings
Could I have been anyone other than me
True poems rest between the words
Give hope a chance to float, it will

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

12 posted 2002-05-11 12:15 PM

Magnus...Very warm and tender love poem. Whisperings soft and gentle wafting across the heart...that's what this poem is.

***Ivy Rose

NapalmsConstantlyConfused

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 529

13 posted 2002-05-11 06:57 AM

*with great solemnity, pours out a libation for you from his Dos Equis Special Lager*

outstanding work, my friend.
-Dave

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