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A Woman's Touch
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A Woman's Touch |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
A Woman’s Touch It was almost too light ~ wraithlike though all woman her touch within was soft, a child's sigh floating in airs of possible she was that touch of promise everlasting, held in silk and sway She wore heels of fulfillment, her stride of capable, compelling and when you were in her diamond brilliance you could not help but shine what is it, to trace the lines again of she who brought you in Motivated you Officiated celebrations Transformed dreams Held on to empower Enthused ecstatically Routed you on your way… Yes…her. A Thanks, to a Mushy Muse, to bring this into being... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
YES...her...without question or doubt... Beautiful poem Elan... Thank You! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Absolutely fantastic!! Incredible write here Elan! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Holy... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Élan darling girl I think this is utterly utterly spectacular. This a truly outstandingly fabulous poem. Such beautiful words, combined in perfection in your marvellous and utterly unique way. Truly perfect writing, and I love it, such a special poem as always written with your hearts touch. You really have a most marvellous way of spinning phrases into magic I love it utterly   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy   To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
E lady, your mother view is a lovely tribute very much enjoyed |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Elan, I apologize for being old and almost blind (kidding)....but just noticed the acrostic with the word MOTHER.....very nicely done.... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"She wore heels of fulfillment, her stride of capable, compelling and when you were in her diamond brilliance you could not help but shine"  (smiles) Awwwwwww, I LOVE IT, your gorgeous words shine with such love for your mother in this lovely dedication! (big hugggssss) May your mom continue to transform your dreams and encourage you with love always, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Elan - nothing quite like a special woman's touch... BC |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
She wore heels of fulfillment, her stride of capable, compelling Beautiful imagery, Elan...  ~womanly hugsLyra |
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EternitysHorizon Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 145Twilight's Orchestra |
The truest of moment only mother could know in beginning all through the course in the basis forever contact defines each unto the moment when becoming became thy Shared Immortal |
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