Open Poetry #20 |
Star of wonder and light (Star Search Challenge) |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Star of wonder and morning light Where might thy be upon the night Wilt thee shine ever bright for me Wilt thy glow, be of mine, to be. Star of Eve upon darkest night Let thee come, burn most bright Cast thy beam into mine eyes Star of Eve, doth bring sighs Star of Love, Star of life Leave my soul within thy own Star of Joy and taker of strife Take mine heart, not be lone. Let thy brilliance comfort all Let thy gleam shine till death Give this man of heart once small One last chance, one last breath. Come to me before the morn Comfort this heart once torn |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Star of Eve upon darkest night Let thee come, burn most bright Cast thy beam into mine eyes Star of Eve, doth bring sighs" this is so beautiful! loved this part.... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) YAY!!! Wow, I love the classic and celestial feel of this, sweet friend, may you always wish upon that twinkling star, for your dreams are bound to come true forever as long as you believe in them! (big hugggssssss) This is awesome, sweet friend, excellent work on the challenge, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
This is so lovely...beautifully written barry..hugs ~Victoria |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Brilliant! I love this! It makes my want to swoon....okay, enough from me.... Seriously, though, I do believe you have carved out a literary masterpiece in this one! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Sparkling**** This is Great! ThisDiamond |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ah yes. . . "look to the stars for thine inspiration. . . " well done Sir. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Barry~ Very lovely my friend....*sigh* you write love and romance so nicely....always.... Lauren~ I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
It reminds me of "Star of wonder, star of light. Star of beauty, mercy bright..." well, something like that! Anyway, enjoyed. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Barry - you romantic you. Lovely write my friend... BC |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Magnus...How often we search for love in the stars, in the Moon. There's just something about them that reflects the ultimate in love. ***Ivy Rose |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
An extremely romantic write and I do believe you met this challenge more than well. We should spend less time worrying about when our life is going to end and more on when it's going to start! |
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