Open Poetry #20 |
Tenderness |
See me? Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 93UK |
Tenderness The pain of being near you is so much that I cannot bear. The pain of being away from you penetrates my soul. Every thought of you I feel my heart tare, But I need you so much so that I can be whole. Life is about change,sometimes its painful,sometimes its beautiful,sometimes its both. |
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Muys Member
since 2002-04-06
Posts 389The Netherlands |
Oh dear it is soooooo sad Four lines and you say everything. Love and hugs Muys |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I know these feelings...James |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This speaks loudly of the loss of that feeling of completeness that we all feel at one time or another, until we learn that we are the only ones that can make us whole. Well done. We should spend less time worrying about when our life is going to end and more on when it's going to start! |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
I know these feeling well. It is a good read. alan |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Clare, this is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I hope you can make that bold step of courage to approach him and feel comfortable again close to him and then settle each others differences to again make your thoughts tender again! (sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, my thoughts are with you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Clare, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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See me? Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 93UK |
Thank you so much for your replies. It eases my heart to know that others have felt this pain and I am not alone. Thank you. Noah I do 'hope I can make that bold step of courage to approach him and feel comfortable again close to him' although i would be at a great loss. Thank you and God Bless Clare Life is about change,sometimes its painful,sometimes its beautiful,sometimes its both. |
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