Open Poetry #20 |
Death Of Heart |
Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Death Of Heart I know you think your souls in night And that you have no hope of light I hear the sound of soul’s soft scream As you struggle in nightmare’s dream But don’t you know this hurts me too As I fight to find my way back through I can’t bear to see the death of heart As this depression rips you apart I know you feel the dark draws near And I can taste the salt of fear When I see the look inside your eyes I witness soul’s heart wrenching sighs But do you wonder what I can see I’m watching the loss of you and me I can’t take the hurt of hearts goodbye Or watching love’s light slowly die I know you say that you feel dead Can’t fight this loss inside your head But I can taste the remains of bliss Still lingering in your beloved kiss Tell me that I’m not touching pain As I softly stroke your heart again I don’t want you packing me away With all your joy of hope and play Marsha To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
always written with such heart hoping your smile returns in your words hugsssssss M |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
How can one not listen to such a plea... |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Marsha, this is sooo sad!!!! It is so well written, and descriptive.. It brings tears to my eyes. _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Ghostly sad. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Written with such longing Marsha. Beautifully penned piece. Enjoyed this much. ~Hugs~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
No one does...James |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Your words well convey the feelings of your desire to help, to comfort and make things OK.... Very well done Mushy... |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Yanno sweetie....I had a poem about a broken heart once, somethin' like: You know you just sorta, stomped on my aorta, think I should find it and write it....ya think?...this is good sweets, yanno, from your pic you look kinda like a fox...do ya fool around |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Marsha, this is soooooo powerfully heartwrenching, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I hope he can realize the way you feel and feel the way you feel and find peace in you and together you can kiss away each others pain! (sigh) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Mushy my love, this poem just reaches out and wrings the heart, so poignant and yearning. Stunning Love!Remember he's getting better. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Marsha - sad write, but getting it out is good. He will be better... BC |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Very haunting Marsha~ such a sadness about it..... Lauren~ I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings |
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