Open Poetry #20 |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
something in the way that the wind moves through the leaves of the trees of time ag ain again the leaves tell of places and times beyond of forests and of trees that have spo ken spoken to those who knew how to listen to the stories and the songs of be ing being among the sun stretching and reaching to the sky and to the planes we know al one alone we learn the way that stretches out before our hearts, showing us all that there is ------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. [This message has been edited by Sven (05-07-2002 04:11 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Sven...James |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
as always enjoy your poetry |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful Sven!! And you just KNOW I love the presentation! ~Big Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Sven, I liked it I always enjoy your words (even if I don't reply enough, I do read ya know) Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
the presentation increased the impact of this quite a bit. well done, indeed. -Dave |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
John, this is simply awesome and georgous! Loved this! Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) YAY!!! Ooohhhhhh...I love the presentation, sweet friend, the way you shaped the words and brought key phrases together cohesively so very well represents one listening to the wind and finding peace there with the whispers whistling through the ears! (sigh) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sven, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This line is perfect "through the leaves of the trees of time" The whole piece evokes a very introspective mood Sandra |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
John, I absolutely loved this piece! ~Laura~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Loved your message here Sven. All that there is if just learn to listen! It's a wonderful way you have. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
sven, lovely message and always beautiful presentation from you. i enjoyed this so much my friend. hope you are well. take care. amy "you can't stop |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh Sven so nicely done, well done ~HUGS~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your presentation of poems always tells me that you write for the reader...enjoyed this one, Sven... |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sven~ This is wonderful, just wonderful....I love how you presented it.... hugsss Lauren~ I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Listening is such a neglected skill, and so simple to learn...yep that is all there is to it! Nicely done Sven! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
I like this experimentation, Sven! Hope you are well! Corinne |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
this is superb....strange, but gives me the same feeling as listening to the intro to Star Trek.....Where No Man Has Gone Before...or words to that effect... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
thank you all my friends. . . I've not been feeling well the past couple of days. . . but, seeing your words about how much you like this is always good for a smile. . . Magnus, that reminds me. . . Star Trek is on later. . . thank you Sir. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sven - love this my friend, also your style... BC |
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