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Open Poetry #20

Star Search (A gem of a challenge)

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2002-05-09 10:09 PM

The pewter moon by barest thread
When suns will melt in blazes red
The yellow orb, the cool blue tale
Unhampered by the pull set sail

To spy in glass or full fledged look
Where does the mystic glow now cook?
The gold of sun or harvest ball
Enchanted twinkle on indigo wall

The brilliant beacon in charcoal haze
Where is the star to lift my gaze?
The radiant dreams set high and hot
Unveil this prince of Camelot

Copyright Kkh 5/9/02

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

1 posted 2002-05-09 10:17 PM

Jumpin' Jehasophat, that's good! (it must be, 'cause I said something corny)

Seriously enjoyed the charcoal haze and blueing sea.

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

2 posted 2002-05-09 10:35 PM

It's a gem of a poem. Your talent is multi-faceted, diamond lady

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2002-05-09 10:46 PM

You have set the mark pretty high for the
rest of us....Nicely done Kathy...very
much so...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-05-09 10:49 PM

Beautifully penned Kathleen!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-05-09 11:05 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always sparkle with such celestial beauty and magic! (kiss on cheek) I would love to try this challenge, this sounds so wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

6 posted 2002-05-09 11:08 PM

visions of the sighting of a golden prince?...interesting write and fine imagery here as always

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

7 posted 2002-05-10 07:40 PM

ThisDiamond - Now how did I miss this? You write well my friend, very well...

BC

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