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Out of Reach
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Out of Reach |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Out of Reach I've schemed my life in stowaway my colors false, present a front. I've thought I found it, held on tight but it was just a treasured hunt of sometimes words and sometimes feels and meetings once upon a blue. I'm out of reach and out of touch, there is no more that you can do. I've known it maybe for a while the heart has always, skipping beats. Sometimes what's best stays deep in hide until the dark admits defeat. I am deflated in many ways no longer tempted by window show. Undressed, the masks I've tossed away, and now it's time for me to know.... or maybe time for me to go... M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (05-10-2002 02:13 PM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
nakdthoughts - you always tell it like it is. And this one says it.... BC |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Maureen darling girl, this is utterly divine, as always your writing far surpasses the mere brilliant and is superb. You know I love this, that is a given of course. The lines are truly exquisite and YOU know I utterly utterly love it. Why is it do you suppose that your writing far surpasses the mere ordinary and soars into wonderment? Well, whatever the reason I utterly utterly love it   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) This is sooooooo poignant and powerful, sweet friend, it can indeed be like a scavenger hunt sometimes but I know you will find the ladders you need and you will climb high to the precipice of where you want your heart to go! (big hugggsssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, I love how you always say it as it is, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Your sadness is beautiful. |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
nakdthoughts... this has the ring of painful honesty. I always enjoy your writings. alan |
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