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ambermize
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since 2001-04-21
Posts 157
California

0 posted 2002-05-10 12:54 PM



Time will wash away the scars,
And I believe this to be true,
Loves essence here is long gone,
And I will no longer love you.

You never filled my life with sunshine,
Never made me feel in love,
I gave into you , despite me,
Something I never should have done.

I thought of you as my strength,
When in truth you drained my soul,
But my ignorance and loyalty,
Convinced me not to go.

You were a comfort in my life,
No matter what you might have done,
You knew me, and I loved that,
But you never were that someone.

The one that captures all emotions,
And holds them safe from harm,
That touches you that certian way,
And blinds you with his charm.

The one that builds your dreams with you,
And stands proudly by your side,
Where promises can mean the world,
And you dont sleep with lies.

For you are that one man,
Who took everything I had,
And gave me my defenses,
To never want to trust agian.

I look back and I know you,
Not from what you've done,
But by the innocence I love to see,
In the eyes of our son.

The one you walked away from,
Without a second glance,
Leaving me to tell him,
Why daddy wont come back.

I have learned so much from you,
And I'll hold it deep inside,
To know that I am strong enough,
To never let you see me cry.

© Copyright 2002 amber mize - All Rights Reserved
Saunni
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777
West Virginia
1 posted 2002-05-10 07:48 AM


Ambermize, that's it! Stand strong! Powerful write here!

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

devina
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539
Cali
2 posted 2002-05-10 11:48 AM


Sounds like you've re-thought your position sis...

It does me good to know you are FINALLY healing...

*I won't give you the "you're too good for that speech"...but you know*

I love you Ambs..
~Tanya

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



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3 posted 2002-05-10 05:27 PM


"I have learned so much from you,
And I'll hold it deep inside,
To know that I am strong enough,
To never let you see me cry."




(big hugggssssss) Oh Amber, though this is such a sad poem, I am so happy too you had the courage to follow your heart and say this to him and do what was right for your son and yourself! (sigh) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, I hope now you have found a true love that you deserve so so much and can relate to your needs, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amber, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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