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Alan
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0 posted 2002-05-10 04:25 PM


Some How

Your smile is as intoxicating as the laugh of a child
Your eyes twinkle like the stars on a dark night
Being in your presence is sheer ecstasy and utter delight
The touch of your hand I mine
Arouses strange feelings in my mind
With lips sweeter than any wine
The thoughts of a kiss nearly blows my mind
A single kiss would be too much to bare
But to get one would make me feel like a millionaire
Thoughts of you are what dreams are made of
Whether it be timeless daydreams
Or steamy nighttime dreams
If I knew then what I know now
I would hold you somehow and gently caress your tired brow
I would dry your tears and calm your fears
If I knew then what I know now
Let you go I would never do,
Your name upon my heart I would tattoo
If I knew then what I know now
I would not have let you go
I would have held on to you somehow
If I knew then what I know now
You would be in my arms and I in yours
As our hearts heaven soared
Only if I had known what I know now

© alan
5/9/02



© Copyright 2002 Alan - All Rights Reserved
Greeneyes
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1 posted 2002-05-10 04:56 PM


Your name upon my heart I would tattoo''

that does sound like love....knowing then what we know now....I cant even tell you how many times I have uttered those words...wishing....*sigh* thanks for the thoughts...


Lauren~


I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings
Could I have been anyone other than me
True poems rest between the words
Give hope a chance to float, it will

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (05-10-2002 04:56 PM).]

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2 posted 2002-05-10 04:59 PM




(smiles) Awwwwww, I too just loved that thought of being tatooed to one sheart forever, sweet friend, may you always hold onto this love and somehow together make it last forever and ever and together soar! (big hugggssssss) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-05-10 05:11 PM


Wonderful romantic write Alan!
Enjoyed so much...
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Kethry
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4 posted 2002-05-10 05:24 PM


Ouch!
ain't nobody tattooing my heart it would be painful. Still you left your imprint on my mind with this poem. Does that count?
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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5 posted 2002-05-10 05:27 PM


"Strange thoughts," hm? Enjoyed this flush of love.
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