Open Poetry #20 |
On Kansas Plain... |
Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
The air is calm, ...no hint of breeze, To touch upon ...the willow trees, As creatures ...of the night emerge, In passing glow ...of daylight's purge. Lone meadowlark ...calls from afar, In serenade ...to evening's star, Venus, goddess ...of the night, Bestow on us ...your sensual light. I stand alone ...on Kansas plain, In awe of splendors ...beyond explain, And though I ...but a mortal be, I gaze up to ...eternity. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Tim You are not alone. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Tim, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I too have this yearning so very much and dream of falling into my loves arms so much and making her happy forever and sharing that star with her! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, may all your dreams come true like this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tim, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This had a chanting quality to it...very pretty in verse, but with a solitude and awe. I remain in awe of your work, m'friend. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
We know where the yellow brick road leads, don't we, Tim? ...IWIHWT.... |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This reads like a whisper in the night. Beautiful. |
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