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Tim
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0 posted 2002-05-12 10:54 PM


The air is calm,
...no hint of breeze,
To touch upon
...the willow trees,
As creatures
...of the night emerge,
In passing glow
...of daylight's purge.
Lone meadowlark
...calls from afar,
In serenade
...to evening's star,
Venus, goddess
...of the night,
Bestow on us
...your sensual light.
I stand alone
...on Kansas plain,
In awe of splendors
...beyond explain,
And though I
...but a mortal be,
I gaze up to
...eternity.

© Copyright 2002 Tim - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-05-12 11:13 PM


Tim

You are not alone.  

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2 posted 2002-05-12 11:16 PM




(smiles) Oh Tim, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I too have this yearning so very much and dream of falling into my loves arms so much and making her happy forever and sharing that star with her! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, may all your dreams come true like this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tim, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-05-13 08:01 AM


This had a chanting quality to it...very pretty in verse, but with a solitude and awe.

I remain in awe of your work, m'friend.

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4 posted 2002-05-13 09:10 AM



We know where the yellow brick road leads, don't we, Tim?   ...IWIHWT....

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5 posted 2002-05-13 08:51 PM


This reads like a whisper in the night. Beautiful.
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