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Xeonox
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0 posted 2002-05-09 10:54 PM


Life don’t work  the same for a man like me
Dealing with drug dealers, billers and shot callers,
I leave my house with a dream of makin it
To live another day in this place
Where I see no race-
Misplaced hate and dangerous fate
Seeing my homie hanging at the same place
Makin deals, addicted to papers and keys,
He ain’t dreamin about being free
Rollin downtown-creepin
Feel like a wolf surrounded
By this white sheep’s-
Authority lackin-
As I keep on slanging
Full of sins
As I survive
Sometimes I don’t why
Not the same life you lead
Made it home today in one piece
Another mouth to feed
Life don’t work the same for a man like me…

Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.)

© Copyright 2002 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-05-09 11:04 PM


some people take the long way around of discovering who they are in life and where they're going..that's what I get from this piece..complements


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2 posted 2002-05-10 02:31 AM


Interesting comment. Thanks.

Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.)

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3 posted 2002-05-10 08:26 PM


My life is certainly not the same as yours...but this gives me a glimpse of your world. Thank you.
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4 posted 2002-05-10 11:10 PM




(sigh) My world also is not like yours, but I klove how your wonderful words always depict sincerely what you believe in and what it's like to be in your setting! (big hugggssssss) We all have different stories to tell, and every one is what makes up the special verse of originality and life! This is excellent, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ronil, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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