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| Open Poetry #20 |
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It's not the same.... |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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Life don’t work the same for a man like me Dealing with drug dealers, billers and shot callers, I leave my house with a dream of makin it To live another day in this place Where I see no race- Misplaced hate and dangerous fate Seeing my homie hanging at the same place Makin deals, addicted to papers and keys, He ain’t dreamin about being free Rollin downtown-creepin Feel like a wolf surrounded By this white sheep’s- Authority lackin- As I keep on slanging Full of sins As I survive Sometimes I don’t why Not the same life you lead Made it home today in one piece Another mouth to feed Life don’t work the same for a man like me… Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.) |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
some people take the long way around of discovering who they are in life and where they're going..that's what I get from this piece..complements  |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Interesting comment. Thanks. Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.) |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
My life is certainly not the same as yours...but this gives me a glimpse of your world. Thank you. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) My world also is not like yours, but I klove how your wonderful words always depict sincerely what you believe in and what it's like to be in your setting! (big hugggssssss) We all have different stories to tell, and every one is what makes up the special verse of originality and life! This is excellent, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ronil, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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