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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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I could ease into you, your words sandwiching me in their tenderness. Layers of me enticing you to open to the art of wishful thinking. The intimacy of your touch, there where addictions can begin, where feelings cannot be disguised, where your eyes say it all, quilling me to your hold. To linger just long enough to breathe you in, I must confess would fill my empty, if only ... For a moment of you is a lifetime in remembrance. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
nakdthoughts - you write romance well, as always... BC |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you Bill..trying to think positive..if you know what I mean hugs M |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
For a second I read "Fill my empty" as "Fill me empty." Which says much more about me than you. And the ending stanza rings like church bells. Big-time enjoyed. [This message has been edited by bsquirrel (05-10-2002 07:30 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
no church bells here just some ringing in my ears.....too much excedrin I think... anyway thanks for the responses, you cheered up an otherwise discouraging day for me should have used this one on the dizzy *s  |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
My favorite dizzy by far is  Which is a far more poetic retelling of my cinco de mayo then I could relate. She said burn ... together. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
you are funny..I usually don't mess around like this but what the hay...I think that's supposed to be hey.....it's nice to let my hair down some days...  *s M [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (05-10-2002 07:42 PM).] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I like the fact that you had to edit that message.  And yeh, it is fun to be silly every once in a while.And it doesn't get much sillier than Black Squirrel of the Apocalypse. (bsquirrel) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) This is soooooo lovely, sweet friend, you indeed write romance so well, may true love always be remembrance to your heart, we all love you so much! (sigh) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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