Silent Eyes........................................................ [revised, repost]

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Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

0 posted 2002-05-16 01:23 PM

Silent Eyes

we spoke the words,
traversed anew
all emotions,
we know what we heard
as I love you
swept our motions

now as
words
go unheard
this is how
we shall remember
liquid still
our sweet surrender

for you looked
once at me
with silent eyes
full love
understanding,
and compromise

you did not want it
all your way
you did not taunt me
with your say
you will not haunt me
on judgment day

for I looked
at you
with silent eyes
full of mischief,
comprehension,
a realize

you had a beginning
that I was not in
I had a past
gone thick and thin
we were now one
in a lowering sun

as we shared
a look
with silent eyes
full of love
laden of promise
awash of silent sighs

so in the days
when words
may not compute
just look with
your silent eyes,
hear, in silence, no refute

and in our silent eyes
hear within no
form of lies
just our sweet,
silk low sighs
where bonds become
silk loose ties
shall we love?
with silent eyes

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2002-05-16 01:26 PM

Thank for this wonderful piece.

silent eyes without
raging desires burn within
losing self control

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2002-05-16 01:37 PM

quiet eyes are the most
well spoken

smooth stuff in it ms whyte

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-05-16 01:38 PM

Dear Lady,
Your writing never ceases to amaze me.
You have a way of capturing the unsuspecting audience in your weave of magical words, carrying them along and leaving them wanting for more.
Excellent write.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-05-16 01:58 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooo romantic, sweet friend, I just love how your words flow like silk down the page and trinkle with such sincerity and rhythm! (kiss on cheek) May you always find tranquility and smiles deep in his eyes, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

5 posted 2002-05-16 02:00 PM

I've got a thing for eyes, actually (as my girlfriend can relate). I really enjoyed this. I don't remember the original post, but this one stands up on its own.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

6 posted 2002-05-16 02:03 PM

I really enjoyed this!

Eliza Simmons
~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2002-05-16 02:10 PM

Lady...seems like you can say alot with silent eyes. Enjoyed this!

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2002-05-16 06:48 PM

enjoy your read

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

9 posted 2002-05-16 08:46 PM

you had a beginning
that I was not in
I had a past
gone thick and thin
we were now one
in a lowering sun

This is so beautiful, Lady in White...
I especailly loved these words because they are so true.

~lots of lovely hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

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