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D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2002-05-08 04:54 PM


Gentle breezes carrying too many memories
Burdon me with too much weight
That my heart should break
Attacking my free spirit to cry

Stormy passion that electrified the lusty skies
Created vivid colors that blends in music
Of two creating such harmony
That the friction created a magic show

Long lost love that will not disembark
Keeps me sighing for more
Of something long gone
That the pages have yellowed
But the book will not close

Such is the power of good love
To survive under all circumstances
For it attaches to you
Feeding upon your day dreams

When everything is lost in a haze
Sometime the heat of the moment
Will create the illusion within you
Of memories walking back into your life

The telephone rang within the mind
Somehow knowing who was there
For I denied your existence
But your voice hypnotized me so

Saying it was over but keeping the bait fresh
The negativity of opposites attracted
Something in your voice now hurt
For the words to reach me
Hit home

The struggle for words now over
It is time for a revival
In me denying you every inch of space
That you had before
For reclaiming my emotions will take you down
Into me loving you conditionally

We will not do anything improper
Thinking yea right
For it time to rock and roll
Knocking off the static past
Creating the jazz
That will thunder in its depth
For the magic this time
Will not let you go


Email me at davelyoung1@hotmail.com
D.Lester Young (03/12/02)
Tuscaloosa, AL
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Suetang
Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
1 posted 2002-05-08 06:17 PM


Hello Dave

This was such a powerful piece of writing that had me enthralled.  I loved it so much I think I'll read it again!

Take care......Sue

Suetang

amusemi
Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262
A State of Disarray
2 posted 2002-05-09 12:51 PM


A keeper!  DLY-One for the book!


JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2002-05-09 06:25 AM


Like this Lester...James
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