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one man spent (my own challenge...sigh)
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one man spent (my own challenge...sigh) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Now the book has turned to heavy there is no easy way to read-- it splits the spine to turn a page there is no easy way to bleed... Now the chapters sing together lost inside the last sentence... READ...the language of forever turn the page of one man spent. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity, Exceptional write, enjoyed every word.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
write your own book ms page at a time just the words you like keeps it light enjoyed the snapshot |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
It's funny -strange how I didn't think of my dad for this challenge..I guess I still don't see him as having been old... M |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Karen~ This is a fantastic read.....wow...I especially enjoyed the images of the spine of the book....  kinda like the spine of life isnt it?Lauren~ I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Serenity Hi there, this is superb writing skill, the way this flows is simply amazing, mum is so right when she says YOU are a wonderful writer, because this is seriously good writing. I love it I really do   Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 BRAVO!!! Wow, this is powerful, sweet friend, yes, it's as if the spine of the book is the gist of all life and supports every chapter we write including those of lost memories that are dog-eared and charred and many clear happy ones! (sigh) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
It is beautiful and intersting TRUE read |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ YES ! A truly poignant read~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Saying brilliant here would be an understatement me sis... how true, how true (sigh) *Big freakin hugs*...'tis been a long time in between them you know!!!  Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
We all line those pages now and again. Mondo enjoyed. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Popping in to express my appreciation. The different styles and thoughts on this particular challenge have touched my heart. I will keep all of the poems in response in my library, and in my heart. And? It is Mother's Day Sunday. If it's still an option for you? Go get a hug. You will never regret a hug. Weepy thank yous. Sigh. (I know. I'm so ridiculous sometimes. I don't think it's the hormones this time either. *sniff* ) |
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