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Red Dawn Rises
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Red Dawn Rises |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Red dawn comes slowly into view casting on the earth brilliant hue waking life from slumber of night sending hungry birds into flight. The softest pillow in caress lightness of a flowing blue dress Warmth of a bed that beckons two forces of dawn bring love anew. Soft kisses that wake one from sleep from dreams of passion ever deep Eyes gleaming as lovers both share waiting for a moment to flare. Beyond a window’s flowing breeze dawn captures all, does not abate Upon the hill of swaying trees echoes whisper...dawn fills the slate. [This message has been edited by Magnus (05-08-2002 05:25 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Magnus...James |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Barry This was stunning and your words captured me from start to finish, as they always do. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed this  |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy This is incredible writing, again you manage to spin words into threads of light that refract and dance in delicate hues of sunshine within. Your writing shines as no other does. And what this brilliant jewel was doing so far down the page with so few answers I don’t know, but I’ve rescued it and lifted it up where it belongs   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Barry, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I just love the colors that the sun leaves behind as it rises or suns, this is a fabulous blush of nature in your words! (sigh) This is beautifully colorful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Barry, you have a way of reaching out to me with the title.... and from there on in....I'm captivated! Excellent... Hugs. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yep...what Enchantress said... from the title to the end pure magic! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
a beautiful write barry...loved it! hugs~Victoria |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry Love at dawn, what could be better? Beautiful! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
The softest pillow in caress lightness of a flowing blue dress Warmth of a bed that beckons two forces of dawn bring love anew. Wonderful Magnus sir. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Magnus...This is EXQUISITE!!! Seductively romantic, teases the heart. ***Ivy Rose |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ah yes. . . very well done. . . I can feel it. . . great work. . . --------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Melodie Morningstarr Junior Member
since 2002-05-09
Posts 16Toronto, ON, Canada |
I've enjoyed your classic style muchly. What a beautiful morning you paint! |
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