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haydenjames
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0 posted 2002-05-08 11:48 AM


The mellow night
Sleeping away star’s eyes
Awakened to love unified
Souls of precious memories
Rekindled of ago

Scent of blissful complexities
Shoved aside with whispers
Astride your lips of blanketed love
This night slips slowly between
Cracks of time our evolution

Under the celestials powdered by clouds
Embarks my hart on this just path
Fortune of destiny has got us this far
Decisions of borders to erase
Implicated by my wish

I now kiss thee with thine lips of love’s clarity

My poetry is at:  http://www.thehayden.org

© Copyright 2002 hayden a. james - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-05-08 12:26 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, I just love the way you ended this, sweet friend, this is soooooo romantic! (big hugggsssss) May loves bliss always fill your night and make the stars shine every night, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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2 posted 2002-05-08 04:27 PM


this is a really good write.
-dave

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3 posted 2002-05-08 04:42 PM


Enjoyed...James
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